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meeshmoose — nightclan's attack patrol

Published: 2010-09-22 00:41:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1151; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 3
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next part of hawktalon's story

Setting: Nightclan border with Dappleclan

Characters: Ferretwhisker Badgerclaw Hawktalon Streampaw Moonclaw Flamepaw Swallowpaw and Mongoosepaw
Time:Early morning
"Keep quiet everyone we dont want dappleclan to hear us." Moonclaw whispered to his fellow warriors and apprentices. "we're fine! Just go this is getting BORING!"Streampaw remarked loudly. "Calm down streampaw." Flamepaw purred as he rubbed against her side. Hawktalon turned his head to the other two apprentices as usual they were giggling and whispering in each others ears. "Mongoosepaw, Swallowpaw, You know better!" They both trned their gaze to the ground. "Sorry" they said simoutainesly. Pretty soon dappleclan will be charging at us. Hawktalon thoutght confidently. Hawktalon then turned to Badgerclaw. "We're splitting up. Moonclaw,Ferretwhisker, Streampaw and Flamepaw you guys attack the camp from behind as Me, Swallowpaw,Badgerclaw, and Mongoosepaw will go straight on, remember dont do anything rash!." He said as they disappeared across the border.
Firepaw didnt care about this stupid fight with dappleclan, he just wanted to be around streampaw and make her happy; which of course thats a very hard thing to do. He leaned on her as they prowled through the underbush.
"Not now flamepaw!", she said in a hushed voice.
"sorry..." he said feeling ashamed.
I know! I'll ask Ferretwhisker for advice on girls! He perked himself up and continued to go on. He started to notice the snerery changing and wondered how his brother was doing with Hawktalon. I love my brother, but he's a pain, he cant get along with anybody swallowpaw!
"Hey son, are you okay?" Moonclaw inquired.
"Ya I'm fine"
"Ok well get your head in the game if you want to stop dapple clan from stealing our prey!"
"yes father..."
Why does he favor mongoosepaw....He's a jerk!!! He sighed and pushed all his strayed thoughts and decided his first fight would be great! I'm going to shred dappleclan apart as if Im wolfscar! He admired the great warrior for her great battle strategies and moves, but of course hawktalon was also a good fighter. even if he is kinda viloent. The dappleclans camp was in range. he could hear sounds of fighting and schreechs of pain.
"We better get in there!" Ferretwhisker gasped.

text not mine it's hawktalon's from nightclan [link]

drawing by me! hope you like it
next part coming soon
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Comments: 24

queen-of-nine-skies [2012-06-08 11:00:10 +0000 UTC]

Nice)

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meeshmoose In reply to queen-of-nine-skies [2012-06-08 14:36:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you x3x this is so old

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Xx-BlazingFire-xX [2011-02-02 17:26:44 +0000 UTC]

The name DappleClan belongs to Spottedstorm >;3 *is Snowsong of NightClan*

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meeshmoose In reply to Xx-BlazingFire-xX [2011-02-03 00:01:38 +0000 UTC]

hey snowy

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Xx-BlazingFire-xX In reply to meeshmoose [2011-02-03 20:49:24 +0000 UTC]

Ohay. I had to delete my old account because I was being falsely accused of copyright infringement.

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meeshmoose In reply to Xx-BlazingFire-xX [2011-02-03 22:05:44 +0000 UTC]

D:

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Xx-BlazingFire-xX In reply to meeshmoose [2011-02-03 22:14:41 +0000 UTC]

It's done now.

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Frostycat [2010-10-31 05:46:38 +0000 UTC]

i love it

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meeshmoose In reply to Frostycat [2010-10-31 12:58:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you :3

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Frostycat In reply to meeshmoose [2011-06-26 02:20:41 +0000 UTC]

ur sooo welcome -3-

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Noelletakumi [2010-10-30 19:25:16 +0000 UTC]

Yay its me in the corner

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meeshmoose In reply to Noelletakumi [2010-10-30 19:27:42 +0000 UTC]

x3 ur eyes are awesome arent they?

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Noelletakumi In reply to meeshmoose [2010-10-30 19:28:38 +0000 UTC]

shaa

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meeshmoose [2010-09-29 01:50:35 +0000 UTC]

ugh i did it so fast

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Shadowluvswolves [2010-09-24 18:31:31 +0000 UTC]

Ferrety that was awesome!!!

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wolfmaster1 [2010-09-23 04:51:39 +0000 UTC]

LOL funny how my 2 bros are in it and so's my mom but not me or my sis. -doesnt really care jsut finds funny-

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meeshmoose In reply to wolfmaster1 [2010-09-25 02:24:03 +0000 UTC]

i didntchose the characters in it, hawktalon did i just illustrated what he wrote sorry D:

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wolfmaster1 In reply to meeshmoose [2010-09-25 03:28:45 +0000 UTC]

ik i just find it funny 8D XD

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meeshmoose In reply to wolfmaster1 [2010-09-25 03:39:24 +0000 UTC]

xD k

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wolfmaster1 In reply to meeshmoose [2010-09-25 06:00:41 +0000 UTC]

ow headache,........

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christmasqwer [2010-09-22 05:09:45 +0000 UTC]

Awesome cats!!! so many of them I hate drawing group pics Love their markings and the backround

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meeshmoose In reply to christmasqwer [2010-09-23 00:41:12 +0000 UTC]

oh thank you! the background is a fail tho xD and yeah group piks are painful xD but oh well

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christmasqwer In reply to meeshmoose [2010-09-23 01:21:28 +0000 UTC]

I love it better than whatever i could do yah, group pics.... I love the back!!

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meeshmoose In reply to christmasqwer [2010-09-25 02:01:58 +0000 UTC]

that's not true i bet you would do better my drawings are sorta "chibi-ish" i'm not too proud of that x( and the bg...like i said xD

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