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Published: 2003-06-25 07:57:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 71; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description Come with me,
To a land far away,
Where we can be free.

Elven children play,
Dancing in the sun,
Singing through the day.

Sun is shining bright,
Skies of clear blue,
Hearts are ever light.

Rolling plains of green,
Beauty everlasting,
As far as can be seen.

Flowers of pure white,
Delicate and fragile,
Shining in the night.

A sea so vast,
So beautiful and blue,
Forever our time can last.

Here there is no war,
Not injustice or discrimination,
But peace forever more.

A place we can be together,
Where happiness is eternal,
And friendships are forever.
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Comments: 9

alexandrasalas [2005-04-28 14:48:08 +0000 UTC]

You know, I could perfectly see this as a song. The words are beautiful and made my mind travel to the wonderful place they describe here. A very inspiring poem, full of hope. Something this world needs desperately now.

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newklear [2004-03-02 09:47:50 +0000 UTC]

Princess, this is absolutely beautiful. Quite a large turn from the bulk of the things you have in your gallery.

It's almost a lucid dreamscape the way you've built it up, the way you've compiled all the images and used the text to give the reader not just a snapshot, but an entire land and existance. Almost as if it's a movie flyby running in the readers' head. Certainly is excellent use of text qualities and the positioning of the reader


I think this poem describes us perfectly, and the place you take me when I'm with you Love you so much babe

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meevilmonkey In reply to newklear [2004-03-02 09:50:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much hun, love you lots

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newklear In reply to meevilmonkey [2004-03-02 10:05:25 +0000 UTC]

No need princess, I was going to comment on it the other night when i was scouring your gallery, but didn't. So, I made up for it now

Glad you enjoyed the comment babe

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CH3-CO-O-CH3 [2004-02-27 11:49:52 +0000 UTC]

Look this is what i mean.. cheerfull great good!!! Yayyy good poem hhunney

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jamberry [2004-01-01 05:45:10 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh, it is a place I would wish for! (Then again, I am very partial to both peace and elves. ) Oh... I love it. ^_^

Would you like to try something? A trade? I'd love to illustrate one of your poems!

Let me know. ^_^ ~ Jammy ~

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Phoenixia [2003-10-19 09:49:57 +0000 UTC]

It's not so thought- or emotion-provoking as the others, but i like the idea, even if it is overused as eternal wanderer says

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eternalwanderer [2003-06-26 04:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Hm, I like it, although it lacks the power of your other pieces. Maybe it's because the same idealistic idea has been used and misused over and over again by wishful poets. Try displaying it in a more original manner, then power should return.

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satinzminion [2003-06-25 08:35:47 +0000 UTC]

OK.....sweet let's go!...lol Nice poem babe, it's a beautiful dream, u keep hope, keep it 4 me. Wonderfully portrayed.
Kurztn

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