HOME | DD

meg-i-licious — Loneliness
Published: 2005-02-19 20:22:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 2263; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 28
Redirect to original
Description She sits alone at night,
Accompanied by her loneliness.
It touches her hand,
And has a hold on her heart.
No one can come in,
And she can't get out.
Her savior is buried beneath the soil,
Labeled by a stone that read,
"Here Lies a Loving Husband"
Marking the beginning of her loneliness.

His soul once carried her to heaven,
And his love kept her feet on the ground,
And his pressence kept her warm,
On those cold winter nights.
Lonely was not an emotion she possessed.

She held his hand,
From day one to the end,
The night he took his last breath,
She kissed his forehead,
And whispered of her love.
His dying words,
"Don't cry for me."
And she didn't.

She sat alone at night,
Holding her loneliness tight,
But not a tear was shead.
And yet her soul bled for him.
Related content
Comments: 20

GulfKiller101 [2016-06-13 19:48:43 +0000 UTC]

and yet I'm the opposite, I'm lonely because I haven't found that sort of love

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

gmegaw [2012-12-28 20:35:50 +0000 UTC]

wow. this is an amazing poem!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

KarlaFluksi [2012-01-13 18:44:09 +0000 UTC]

This is so sad...

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

angel0fhope [2010-06-20 01:46:57 +0000 UTC]

This should have more favorites and views. It's an aboslutely amazing poem.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Dark-Angelx-X [2008-12-25 20:37:29 +0000 UTC]

i really love it , soooooo sad and beautiful

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Mhrock [2008-08-31 17:27:19 +0000 UTC]

Loneliness has may faces... I like no rhyme at the very end.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

DHnut186 [2008-08-27 11:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Awww....This is so sad! You're a great poet! I've never had a loved one die before, but I know what it's like to have noone that loves you and makes you feel special. I'll bet the pain of losing a loved one is so much worse than not having a loved one at all.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Zurkhardo [2008-08-09 02:42:32 +0000 UTC]

Well down, it really appeals to me.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

grotesque-emo [2008-07-28 07:35:50 +0000 UTC]

so sad, and touching...

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

pNutx [2007-02-28 11:56:17 +0000 UTC]

wow. this is good.
the no.1 into my faves.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

meg-i-licious In reply to pNutx [2007-03-14 02:08:08 +0000 UTC]

awww thank you. you're sweet.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Meryovi [2007-02-08 13:47:18 +0000 UTC]

Great...
Congratulations.

It has a deep feeling on it.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Miruflow [2006-11-15 04:21:49 +0000 UTC]

Great job, I imagined a queen feeling the loneliness that left her late husband( i dunno why I thought that)

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

meg-i-licious In reply to Miruflow [2006-12-13 21:00:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks, that's interesting, i hadn't really thought of it that way, but I suppose it works

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

blcktangledheart [2005-02-23 19:58:59 +0000 UTC]

That is really touching. you have a good way of building a story without being too lengthy about it. i like that! good work.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

meg-i-licious In reply to blcktangledheart [2005-02-24 02:53:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanx!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

cCapone116 [2005-02-20 18:27:53 +0000 UTC]

aw that so sad. so touching. this is amazing lovie

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

meg-i-licious In reply to cCapone116 [2005-02-22 15:16:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you lovie

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

NoseTwitch [2005-02-20 04:31:47 +0000 UTC]

Awe meg...thats rele sad...

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

tracar [2005-02-20 01:01:08 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!!! This is so touching and sad. I love the concept here-this is a great piece.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0