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basketballgurl14 [2008-09-16 20:31:11 +0000 UTC]
be careful of your porportions, but other then that its good
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Meje2 In reply to basketballgurl14 [2008-09-16 21:01:28 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I'm really bad with proportions... uhm where is it wrong, maybe I can change it a little
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basketballgurl14 In reply to Meje2 [2008-09-16 21:28:50 +0000 UTC]
hands/arms, especially on Hinata is the most noticable. HER right arm looks too long, and the angle you drew her wrist makes it awkardly big.
I'm not trying be be mean, and if I sound mean I am sorry! I'm just trying to help, proportions are oh-so hard I know! I can't really draw them either
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basketballgurl14 In reply to Meje2 [2008-09-16 22:06:41 +0000 UTC]
hhhmmm try to make her right wrist a little rounder? maybe its just me, but it looks to pointy idk...
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basketballgurl14 In reply to Meje2 [2008-09-17 19:10:08 +0000 UTC]
well its still good! how do you do this anyway??
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basketballgurl14 In reply to Meje2 [2008-09-17 19:49:08 +0000 UTC]
oh, did you have to buy it or something?
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basketballgurl14 In reply to Meje2 [2008-09-17 21:18:08 +0000 UTC]
oh... lol I am horrible with computers... I don't know how to do anything... hahaha
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Meje2 In reply to basketballgurl14 [2008-09-18 12:37:12 +0000 UTC]
I'm 24/7 at my laptop can't live without it or the internet *hugs laptop*
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basketballgurl14 In reply to Meje2 [2008-09-18 19:15:31 +0000 UTC]
I am the same way! always on facebook, always here lookng for cool Naruhina pics or fics. and now I am writing too! lol
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basketballgurl14 In reply to Meje2 [2008-09-19 02:43:29 +0000 UTC]
That is how I began my fan fic, I was readin like 10 naruhina fics and was like, maybe I could try one lol.
I'm glad you are addicted, you write GREAT fics!
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Meje2 In reply to basketballgurl14 [2008-09-16 21:32:43 +0000 UTC]
no it's okay, it's helpful ^^ thanks, let me try to fix it
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rageofkyubii [2008-09-16 18:23:01 +0000 UTC]
Aww, so cute!
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Meje2 In reply to naruhina4ever101 [2008-09-16 17:53:57 +0000 UTC]
handen horen net zo groot als het hoofd te zijn ^^
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Meje2 In reply to naruhina4ever101 [2008-09-16 18:54:10 +0000 UTC]
hmm misschien kan ik helpen waar gaat het over?
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naruhina4ever101 In reply to Meje2 [2008-09-16 19:46:23 +0000 UTC]
een meisje Ichigo, ze heeft geen ouders meer en woont bij een vriendin, een soort moeder voor haar. als ze 16 word krijgt ze krachten waar ze niks van af weet en probeert ze opzoek te gaan naar haar familie om zo meer over haar krachten te weten komen. ze wil eigenlijk niet omdat ze niet met die familie in contact wil komen. haar beste vriend Kai, probeert haar te helpen. die heeft ook het een en ander te verduren op dit moment want er is iets mis met zijn broer.
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naruhina4ever101 In reply to Meje2 [2008-09-17 15:08:38 +0000 UTC]
het wordt 'Ichigo's power' ^-^
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sigel4ever [2008-09-16 14:24:38 +0000 UTC]
great!
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