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MELONLORD54 — Scars from the past, Strength for the future
Published: 2012-09-20 23:06:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 736; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 5
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Scars from the past, Strength for the FuturePrologue
"Run! Get out of here! It will be okay. I….I promise "
Lin awoke with a scream, cold sweat was running down her face. She'd been having the same nightmare lately , the same tragic memory that never seemed to go away.
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It was a cold windy night in republic city, the trees were blowing, the turtle- ducks were sitting in a pond getting ready to go to sleep. Benders and Non-benders everywhere were in their warm cozy beds dreaming about climbing mountains or maybe even riding dragons through Republic city. The whole world was asleep, except for two women.
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I realized the grammer mistake after I uploaded it ...sorry :T
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Besides that tiny mistake (that I caught afterwards) what did you think? xD
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Well it sounds like-... You know. No. I'm not gonna say anything perverted for once. xD I think you should hurreh up and write some more. Let's leave it at that.
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* Rereads prologue *.............. Oh gosh amber.......O.o ...lol....and yeah I will try to update soon ..and ..I actually just got into painting and I did some art ...but I don't know how to get it on my computer and post it 
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Well, taking a pic on a phone or camera isn't suggested (but it's okay...) because it turns out weird... If it's small enough you can use a scanner to scan it onto your computer. Camera phone ... can work.. eh...
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Gah ik I realized that like right after I uploaded it :T I shall make no more mistakes! Lol
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