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Published: 2013-12-28 21:16:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 13220; Favourites: 245; Downloads: 204
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And here comes another Art Trade :TThis time with the fantastic mr.
I know I said this was probably going to take me 'til january, well I lied... or rather the circumstances are better than I thought? What am I even talking about?
This is Veronica, from his project Diabolic Bastards :T
This is what he drew for me :3
Aaaaand I gues that's all, I'll work on the kiriban prizes next .3.
EDIT : Edited a bunch of things, suggested in critique by *CakeHoarder
EDIT 2 : Edited again :V
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Wow ^^ First things first, I just want to say her hair looks absolutely soft and gorgeous! Her tummy/thighs are really well done as well. I really like the type of shading you went for here.
There's only a few things I feel could be touched upon in this picture.
1: Anatomy. The body looks great, and her head to body ration translates well into your style, so that she is believably human. However, her visible hand's middle finger needs to be longer, and her neck needs to be better defined. Also, the foot on the left is a lot bigger than the foot on the right, so maybe shrink it a little. And her forearm looks a *liiiittle* big, but it might just be me being picky.
2: Shading. While I feel the hair is perfect the way it is, it's a touch inconsistent with the rest of the picture. Especially around her torso, you get a lot of bulky shades, I can definitely tell you didn't spend as much time on this as with her hair. I feel like since you put a decent effort into the hair, you could do it there too. Not to say it looks bad, just doesn't match. Same with the bottom of the dress, which compared to the hair, could be arguably two different pictures.
This picture looks great though, loving the use of black especially, it's great for contrast and helps it to not look boring. And the fat distribution looks believable and soft, which is always a challenge. All in all, I think you have a really nice piece here. c:
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ah, thanks a lot, I really appreciate fair critique, and it's kinda difficult to find them here since everyone is so indulgent, I'll consider these points for my next picture and will probably edit this one if possible
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Well you have a great picture to begin with 
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Yeah, I see that and I appreciate it, and you didn't really touched the style, just the anatomic and coloring mistakes, most of the people in this website take offense when receiving critique or are assholes when giving it
thanks again :3
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Of course c: Anytime
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I've edited the picture, what do you think now?
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The arm looks good ^^ The foot still looks a little long, and maybe her neck could be more defined still?
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that's not what your momma said last night (?)
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Hehehe you really wanna know that ?
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Whoa you sure are creepy sometimes...
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I wonder if i can get you to draw her again with her current moveset (?)
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She has different attacks?
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Yeah, she learned "weapon arts" (?)
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She can do some sort of critical hit?
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You said it's only use was for PVP so i Guess (?)
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o.m.g. ! she is so pretty is so cute and adorable ... i love herΒ Β Β
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ahahah ya te extraΓ±aba ponchira (?)
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ahahaha sonic...
u_u
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has visto lo que le han echo a mi pobre sonikkuΒ
TTWTT
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Ooooh, que le han puesto vendas a todo, que Knuckles parece un oso y que Tails lleva ropa de ingeniero?
La verdad es que nunca me he interesado por Sonic, pero igual se me hace feo.
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lo que mas me molesta son esas vendas onda que demonios han de llevarlas todos?
porque?
y knuckless es muiy "bara" XD
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Hahahah, si, el que todos lleven vendas es ridΓculo, en Knuckles lo entiendo si se supone que es el que da puΓ±etazos.
AdemΓ‘s el nombre del nuevo juego suena como esa tΓ©cnica de un personaje de Street Fighter
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ahahah ya, es que lo de sonic boom viene de hace aΓ±ares, pero esta es la primera que lo usan de titulo, es que esas vendas son ridΓculas, y porque tantas, el unico que sinceramente se ve mejor es tails, los demΓ‘s no se, me gusta la bufanda en sonic, pero lo demas :/
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Sonic Boom 4, todos los personajes son ahora momias :V
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nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
TT____________TT
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Sonic Boom 6, los personajes serΓ‘n simplemente vendas que se mueven
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ya parale viejo(?)
eso si, el "dibujito" ten por seguro que lo verΓ© religiosamente :3
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Sonic Boom 10, vendas que se mueven por un mundo de vendas para derrotar a las vendas del mal con su poder de las vendas
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ok now you're just being silly(?)
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I'm always silly, you silly pie :T
That's why I like you
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hey i recent that remark D:
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me estas llamando silly XD
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aaaaaaaah, heheheheh, pero es que escribiste Recent en lugar de Resent
y luego te extraΓ±as de que te llame Silly :V
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oh discΓΊlpame por no ser perfecto y escribir todo 100 % bien todo el tiempo como tu :3
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