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Published: 2007-01-10 12:02:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 54; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description To you I plead,
My everything.
My heart, my soul,
My life, my kin.
You take me now,
Restore my all.
Control the tide,
Break my fall.
Watch the stars,
Reflect the light.
Be the one,
Stay the night.
Capture,
Control,
Collide,
Correct,
Connect,
Coil,
Cull,
Keep;
Just keep.
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Comments: 7

RejectFalseIcons [2007-01-15 06:04:34 +0000 UTC]

it doesnt always matter what there about or why they are were they are
or what made you right them
but that they exist is the most important thing

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mercy4jane In reply to RejectFalseIcons [2007-01-18 04:34:04 +0000 UTC]

I guess.

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Tharian [2007-01-12 07:54:29 +0000 UTC]

Very nice

Do you mean it in a happy way, or a non-happy way?

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mercy4jane In reply to Tharian [2007-01-12 16:40:32 +0000 UTC]

Non-happy. Its me begging. Its meant as pathetic. It shows how love can turn some people to complete fools and that give others power over them. The last few lines show that.

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Tharian In reply to mercy4jane [2007-01-12 16:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I thought so but I didn't want to give negative comment on something positive

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mercy4jane In reply to Tharian [2007-01-12 16:50:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks kool. I love your comments, they actually mean something.

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Tharian In reply to mercy4jane [2007-01-12 17:24:17 +0000 UTC]

ty ^^

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