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mercy4jane — So Many
Published: 2007-01-10 12:18:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description There's so many things I want to tell you,
So many thing I want you to perceive.
So many lies, truths, stories, hopes, happinesses,
So much, too much.
I'm scared, scared you'll reject me,
Scared you love her more.
And you do.
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Comments: 5

metapianycist [2007-02-15 00:54:38 +0000 UTC]

This sounds like it has the potential to be a letter in prose, perhaps an opening to a short story. Very expressive.

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nicolebullshxt [2007-01-16 21:58:42 +0000 UTC]

i had a best friend. her boyfriend split up our friendship. she was the only person i could tell anything too. i still miss her a lot. and i wish i could talk to her, but all he says is that i'm a fuckup and a bunch of bullshit that isn't even true.
*sigh* it sucks.
but i hope that things will be alright with that, if it's still going on.

((really neat poem, btw. i like the writing style so much. amazing.))

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mercy4jane In reply to nicolebullshxt [2007-01-18 04:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Its not going on anymore. About six months ago she made him stop seeing me. It has alot to do with alot of shit.

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RejectFalseIcons [2007-01-15 06:03:15 +0000 UTC]

i so hate his ex so much
damn her
good poem tho

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mercy4jane In reply to RejectFalseIcons [2007-01-18 04:31:43 +0000 UTC]

Who's ex?

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