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metaknight-fangirl13 In reply to CuppaStars [2010-02-19 22:24:13 +0000 UTC]
I'm trying to fix it, but it didn't let me upload the fixed file yesterday, I plan on trying again today
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Cozigiraffe [2010-02-18 02:16:45 +0000 UTC]
Wow! The special effects on the pic like the moon and MK's eyes. The only things, however, that I have to say against it is that the ridges on MK's mask are different on the sides and are a little distracting. The eyes, also are different. One eye is rounded while the other looks really sharp. I would say that either one would be fine but they should be consistent. Also, the shading was nice but the cape and gloves are still pure white. They stand out a little but too much.
For the words at the top of the screen, they blend a little bit too much with the stars and I think it would have been better to place the words at the bottom in the grass where it could be seen better. Speaking of the stars, I think there is too much of them in the sky. I think a few small stars would make the sky stand out without drawing attention away from the focus, which in this case is MK and Kirby.
Also, what are the black things in the grass? Just wondering.
Overall, there are some things that could be done to make this picture more clean and draw attention to MK and Kirby. I DO love the expression on Kirby's face as he is trying to figure out what MK is doing and I think the poses they are drawn with are very free and natural for them, which some artists have a lot of trouble with. I hope to see more Meta Knight and Kirby drawings from you soon! ^_^
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bleupaw [2010-02-18 00:52:13 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! :3
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klefkis [2010-02-17 21:25:44 +0000 UTC]
Nice. >:3
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