briative [2009-08-21 01:02:42 +0000 UTC]
You're very good at proportions, I commend you on that. I'm also drawing this picture, haha.
A few tips:
You could be an INSANELY good pencil artist with a little practice.
Deeper tones would do you well, as well as a smoother method of blending. Your paper seems very textured, and that's not good for a realistic pencil portrait. Get some smooth paper and you'll have an easier time blending. I like using tissues for smudging and making everything look smoother. The hair looks pretty good, but it could use a little more definition. =Cataclysm-X has awesome tutorials for hair, eyes, lips, blending, and everything you could think of.
Keep it up, you're a great artist!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1