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Midnight101 — The Four Great Leaders

Published: 2010-03-23 20:26:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 773; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 14
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It feels good to post up my own art again, besides MS Paint. But the horrible thing about this drawing is the Scanner!The Fucking Scanner ate up the color! Well I hope you all enjoy this piece because i do! And I'm sure you all are happy that I get to post art up!
This is a drawing of the four Great Leaders of the forest
They're, Firestar, Blackstar, Onestar, and Leopardstar.

On the top->Leopardstar
Bottom-> Firestar
Right side-> Onestar
Left Side-> Blackstar

In this drawing they're all remembering their first prey that they caught. It took a while to plan this drawing through because I was afraid I would make it bad looking.I'm not really good at drawing cats, I had people at my school ask me are they wolves? And I tell them they're cats, and one of them mistaken Firestar for a Fox

This is a drawing based on a Novel by Erin Hunter, one of my favorite Author's.

Warriors(c) Erin Hunter
Art(c)Me
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Comments: 34

HanneDobermann [2010-03-25 23:05:12 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


okay, first of all, i love those books! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/>
now on to the critique e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> your overall layout is very creative. the water on the top with the fish is excellent!
with the 2 profile heads, you want to be sure that the ridge isnt so prominent. if you look here, its more of a simple slope-[link]
Leopard and Firestar's heads look great though! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/>
you want to be sure that their eyes dont look so canine-ish. they should be rounder, almost like an almond shape-[link]
the clouds need a bit of work. yeah clouds are hard though! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="24" height="18" alt="" title="CURSE YOU!"/>
if you want to try a natural looking cloud like this-[link] , try shading different areas with different pressures to get an effect.
like this cloud-[link] same thing. i suggest googling clouds and referencing them e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
as with the lighting...i would not make it so "z" like. it should be random, and at different widths.-[link] see how there is one bolt with little "branches" coming off and how its at different widths and lengths? when i draw lightning i make the lines random, but still flowing off of the main bolt
lastly, a little more shading definition on firestar would add more impact. instead of red, try using purples, browns and blacks in the darker areas! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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Midnight101 In reply to HanneDobermann [2010-03-26 01:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Well, I didn't actually draw him red the scanner made it a much brighter color, which that's what I ment when my scanner didn't really behave.

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HanneDobermann In reply to Midnight101 [2010-03-26 01:31:25 +0000 UTC]

ah scanners are made to piss artists off XD

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Midnight101 In reply to HanneDobermann [2010-03-26 01:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Seriously! Why were they made to piss us off?!

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HanneDobermann In reply to Midnight101 [2010-03-26 01:39:49 +0000 UTC]

D: i dont know, but mine does the same to me!

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Midnight101 In reply to HanneDobermann [2010-03-26 02:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I always see in the Author's comment about that damn Scanner messing up

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HanneDobermann In reply to Midnight101 [2010-03-26 05:51:37 +0000 UTC]

of course, of course

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Midnight101 In reply to HanneDobermann [2010-03-26 20:41:06 +0000 UTC]

They mess with our minds, soon they will take over the world

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stormyytears [2017-03-18 21:23:53 +0000 UTC]

Awww so cute

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Blackwolfraptor [2010-03-26 06:40:23 +0000 UTC]

lovely work! epic!

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Midnight101 In reply to Blackwolfraptor [2010-03-26 22:26:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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zephyrwolfen [2010-03-24 18:15:10 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic work - I love their faces (so catlike and hard to draw ) and your traditional art is great!

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Midnight101 In reply to zephyrwolfen [2010-03-24 21:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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zephyrwolfen In reply to Midnight101 [2010-03-25 19:56:25 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome indeed!

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Midnight101 In reply to zephyrwolfen [2010-03-26 01:34:37 +0000 UTC]

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zephyrwolfen In reply to Midnight101 [2010-03-26 18:00:24 +0000 UTC]

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Midnight101 In reply to zephyrwolfen [2010-03-26 20:26:43 +0000 UTC]

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zephyrwolfen In reply to Midnight101 [2010-03-28 14:57:43 +0000 UTC]

Awww! That's just beyond cute XD!

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Midnight101 In reply to zephyrwolfen [2010-03-29 20:28:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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zephyrwolfen In reply to Midnight101 [2010-03-30 15:14:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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fawn555 [2010-03-24 18:04:32 +0000 UTC]

I really think they look like cats, not wolves or foxes. Great job!

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Midnight101 In reply to fawn555 [2010-03-24 21:34:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Faminefoot [2010-03-24 00:48:03 +0000 UTC]

Very nice ^^ I likee

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Midnight101 In reply to Faminefoot [2010-03-24 01:13:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Faminefoot In reply to Midnight101 [2010-03-25 00:04:40 +0000 UTC]

np!

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RingTailWolf [2010-03-23 23:13:45 +0000 UTC]

Very well done!

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Midnight101 In reply to RingTailWolf [2010-03-24 00:04:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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silverlionwolf [2010-03-23 22:02:26 +0000 UTC]

It looks awesome!

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Midnight101 In reply to silverlionwolf [2010-03-23 22:05:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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silverlionwolf In reply to Midnight101 [2010-03-23 22:14:28 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Murley [2010-03-23 21:02:17 +0000 UTC]

What an original and colorful artwork )

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Midnight101 In reply to Murley [2010-03-23 21:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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lizcat14 [2010-03-23 20:28:07 +0000 UTC]

nice job

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Midnight101 In reply to lizcat14 [2010-03-23 20:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
This drawing took me at least three days!

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