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sanjouin-dacapo [2013-08-30 22:59:35 +0000 UTC]
The hair looks really nice, and I like the anatomy and such in this one, though the toes could use some work. The shading looks kinda dodge/burny though and could use more complementary colours. As for the spots on her tail, I was wondering if you ever tried smudge-painting them a little with small and large brushes, to make them look more realistic. The pattern just looks like it was cut out from something when realistically it would bend to conform to the tail's positioning. The spots on the ears look okay but could also use some smudge-paint texturing.
Also, I noticed that the tail looks kind of like one of the button or plastic effects was used to give it highlights, and it makes it look like one of those puffy stickers. The picture still looks quite nice, but try working on things like tails and your future pics will look a lot better!
Anyhoo, you did a great job. Keep it up!
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midnight21 In reply to sanjouin-dacapo [2013-08-31 03:09:36 +0000 UTC]
yeah i know. sometimes it's hard to work with color shading and in the end, it tends to look like you used the burn and dodge tool. it gets worse with black furred characters. at least it's not blinding like some artists we know.Β this is just a concept... i might draw up another one within the next few months and try different things with the spots but overall I like how it turned outΒ and it feels nice to have something I could call my own again.
realism isn't exactly my cup of tea... i'm more of the cartoony type i guess. but at least i tried lol
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sanjouin-dacapo In reply to midnight21 [2013-08-31 03:19:13 +0000 UTC]
Well, the cartoony style is cool too. Just give a little bit of a fur texture and she will look awesome! And yup, it's definitely not blinding like the works of a certain somebody. I mean I really don't 'get' her... the way she talks it sounds like she got over everything, but is she still trying to contact you? Ugh. Reminds me of me, but even I wasn't *that* bad. Beh. And if I were to have a child, I would actually take care of it, rather than spending all my time playing Warcraft.
Um, anyway... I'm probably going to need a beta-reader soon. Might send my fics to Dawn or to you. Also, that one pic of Olivia that you drew, with the rosy shading... she's so beautiful! I wish a certain someone didn't ruin her.
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midnight21 In reply to sanjouin-dacapo [2013-11-11 21:31:44 +0000 UTC]
i guess the toes could use some work too. i was trying for a combination of human/cat feet... i'm not gonna be butt hurt over this one because it's just a concept anyway and i need to get back into the habit of drawing and coloring again after being dormant through most of the year.
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sanjouin-dacapo In reply to midnight21 [2013-11-12 13:39:32 +0000 UTC]
Ah ok. Mind you though, I still have to work on a lot of stuff when it comes to my arts. At least they are a fair bit better than the bulk of my old, old stuff XD
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midnight21 In reply to Ryivhnn [2013-08-14 21:30:44 +0000 UTC]
yeah i was thinking about it but then i was worried that it might be a little overpowering so i stuck with the ears and tail. plus mercede's parents are different... one a solid color the other spotted... fel had a different father I guess. I haven't really worked out their parents yet so it's something to think about.
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midnight21 In reply to Ryivhnn [2013-08-16 10:46:47 +0000 UTC]
i suppose i could try a light spot pattern...never really thought of it. but overall i really like this concept and it's nothing like... a certain character that gives me bad memories. it's a perfect new beginning for me and all that's left is to create a believable personality and life.
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kellendraysia [2013-08-11 02:51:40 +0000 UTC]
I think the outlining of the spots helps make them stand out and seem more cohesive to the entire piece. It gives them a nice hand drawn appearance. The outlining that you did had good line weight as well. I think the spot design is really unique and adds a lot to her character. I love the fact that her nose color and hair color seem to match. It's super cute that way. What color are her eyes? It's hard to tell if they are blue or green or a blue green, they are lovely but I was just curious.
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kellendraysia In reply to midnight21 [2013-08-11 11:19:40 +0000 UTC]
I like that light sea green I think it works well with the rest of her coloration.
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midnight21 In reply to kellendraysia [2013-08-11 11:58:39 +0000 UTC]
yeah me too. i consider part of this color scheme to be a happy accident... XD
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kellendraysia In reply to midnight21 [2013-08-11 21:20:46 +0000 UTC]
Happy accidents are always good XD
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midnight21 In reply to kellendraysia [2013-08-11 22:36:02 +0000 UTC]
indeed. now it's just redeveloping her personality and life into something I really like and create their parents too...
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Ax25 [2013-08-06 12:13:17 +0000 UTC]
She's very beautiful <333
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Wulfspider [2013-08-05 12:45:10 +0000 UTC]
She's beautiful. x3
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chainedthunder [2013-08-05 03:54:20 +0000 UTC]
wah it looks great !! C:
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TurtleSea [2013-08-05 00:24:50 +0000 UTC]
she looks beautiful
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Artaith-21 [2013-08-04 18:39:33 +0000 UTC]
Her hair looks really awesome!
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midnight21 In reply to Artaith-21 [2013-08-04 23:37:34 +0000 UTC]
thanks. ^_^ Of course I had to tweak this piece and submit it again because I found the spots overpowering... i used a slightly lighter shade this time and it seems to work... I think the spots might be here to stay.
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Darennysmith [2013-08-04 13:34:37 +0000 UTC]
Sweet
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