Comments: 123
kaydee1657 [2018-03-12 03:10:40 +0000 UTC]
Eagerly awaiting next chapter. Ohhhh what are the evil boys going to do to her? Hehehehe evil cackle...
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GeneticEleutheria [2015-04-22 02:32:26 +0000 UTC]
xD I almost expect Elle to say: How about you go to that somewhere private on yourself
Nicely written!!
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pixelgirl112 [2014-12-13 14:59:12 +0000 UTC]
That is so intense... I love it!! I love stories like this!! You are an AMAZING writer!!
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snoopgirl55 [2013-10-06 20:20:26 +0000 UTC]
This is my favorite story about these two XD LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT! <3
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Geegens In reply to MissRanger [2013-12-06 18:42:35 +0000 UTC]
I know! I have reread this so many times!
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WaterDragonRai [2012-12-07 21:42:06 +0000 UTC]
Well....at least she tried to defend herself, and she didn't seem to think that looks mean everything. Good for her. A shining example in these dark, Bella filled times.
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Brushogen [2012-11-07 22:56:37 +0000 UTC]
now That's what I call a rough start
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DragonFlame123 [2012-09-21 01:00:41 +0000 UTC]
I am in love with this story!!
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somnoroasa [2012-09-11 07:33:26 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful !
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QuickStarBlossom [2012-09-03 00:19:22 +0000 UTC]
I have become a fan of Mias and Ellen now
8D
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LyraSilverfors [2012-06-22 12:10:59 +0000 UTC]
This really held me captured from the first to the last word! But I think I'll need a break before I start reading the other captures.
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Firey-Fox [2012-05-01 17:33:53 +0000 UTC]
AMAZING!
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red--ro-se [2012-04-22 22:54:45 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE IT. MY HEART. JUST... GODS.
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Julfir [2012-04-03 16:08:09 +0000 UTC]
Oh my, this is too amazing! I dare think I enjoyed this chapter as much as you enjoyed writing it. But oh, I notice now that I've been neglecting my English for far too long - I had to visit my dictionary far too often to my liking, hehe. I just love your writing! Nothing seems unnatural about their characters, I mean, the impression I have of them, everything is perfect!
(...this is also the first fanfic I have ever read!)
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TheFallenRose [2012-03-17 12:39:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh my goodness...... I just spent my entire morning reading this for the first time, and it was quite amazing. I love how you make Mias and Elias alike in their confidence, yet when it comes to how they treat Elle, completely diverse and very intriguing. I adore Elle's personality and mind in how she's a hard-to-get gal, but inside her heart is burning with the purest form of passion for Mias. I wish that you were to still write more about these characters, yet I think that it is perfect the way it is and that you should let the audience use their imagination for the rest. If it wasn't for me being a bit blurry eyed today as it is, I would have been bursting into tears because I feel like I am with the characters in their story, feeling every bit of emotion they're feeling.
Excellent job!
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flakoo120 [2012-03-17 02:09:48 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely ADORE reading, but lately, I haven't been able to find ANY good books that hold my attention for the entire book! NOT ONE. This is by far the BEST thing I have read in a while, not to mention stressedjenny's BEAUTIFUL pics to go with it-ALL FOR FREE! Though I would pay any amount of money to see it too! You and stressed jenny should SERIOUSLY talk about getting this thing published as a real book, and a graphic novel. You are a beautiful writer!
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SmirkingRaven [2012-03-10 15:54:51 +0000 UTC]
Fabuous start! I've been fangirling about Elle and Mias for years now, just waiting for Jess to make the comic (dunno if that is still happening) and I just couldn't bring myself to read any of the fanfics. I'm so glad I started reading yours it's just how I pictured the story and your doing extremely well following the charaters!!
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AsTheClockStrikes12 [2012-01-04 20:29:40 +0000 UTC]
Love it, already addicted, fab start!!
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HikariNoMelody [2011-12-23 19:34:43 +0000 UTC]
I love this!!! I will now follow thee... not in the creepy way tho
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flogchacha [2011-12-03 06:10:43 +0000 UTC]
I'm really confused because I just read some fan fiction explaining how they met and stuff soooo what is this??
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ViNtAgE-vErVe [2011-11-20 03:51:27 +0000 UTC]
lol! Elle just got mind roofied! XD
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ViNtAgE-vErVe [2011-11-20 03:51:04 +0000 UTC]
lol! Elle just got mind roofied! XD
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MikoAyasaki [2011-11-09 14:32:42 +0000 UTC]
I never really liked romance , but this fan fiction is really awesome :3
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Can you feel the Love tonight ? It is where we are.
-Elton John
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VKBIkaya [2011-11-03 18:41:50 +0000 UTC]
OMG, i just love this!!!!
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azhul [2011-10-17 07:13:06 +0000 UTC]
moreee!!!
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WickedEgg [2011-10-02 23:15:03 +0000 UTC]
This was so provocative and fun to read! I am definitely going to read more after I finish this comment! Great job !
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Sky-Hart [2011-10-01 20:40:49 +0000 UTC]
Kwl, but when did elle and mias first meet?? have you written about it?
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Ellie-Bug [2011-09-22 03:04:56 +0000 UTC]
WOW! Loved all of the stories, keep being epic.
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CP416 [2011-09-12 03:24:24 +0000 UTC]
Wow probably one of the best fanfictions I've read on here. I really like the characters personalities, their so well thought out and your word choice is immaculate. Can't wait to read more
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iAngelofMusic [2011-09-11 23:07:09 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing! I don't think I've ever read a better fanfic.
I'm actually on a second time through now and I noticed that you use Mias's name in Elle's point of view before she learns his name.
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MangafisenSasha [2011-09-10 14:38:47 +0000 UTC]
This is great :3 I'm going to read the next page right away <3
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Satyr-Hunter [2011-09-08 02:47:40 +0000 UTC]
thats amazing i love it!
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BritsMc13 [2011-09-08 01:24:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh, sounds like we're off to a good start >.<
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Terrajaide [2011-09-07 23:50:41 +0000 UTC]
Can someone say... DATE RAPE!
You're an awesome writer BTW.
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