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Published: 2012-08-06 22:53:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1607; Favourites: 111; Downloads: 5
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Happy birthdayi posted this one day early cuz i couldnt resist not posting it. D:
I just wanted to practise waist-ups again so i used ur adorable oc, and then decided to give it to u for ur bday.
I cant believe i spent 2 hours on this while i should be doing other things TT_TT
Hope u like it
have a great day!!I would like advice on hair coloring (to make it look shinier and more prettier), skin coloring, and anatomy
(How much do u think a waist-up like this is worth in points? Id like suggestions of prices please!!!)
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She looks very cute! I like the expression and the little bow. Maybe the hair has the highlights a little to bright. I do like the style of highlights though so please keep them, just turn it down a notch or two.
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Hey there 
>> The gradient is a little bit too much. Try to lessen it a bit
>> Then put a few more details on the dress
>> The shoulders are not evenly leveled
>> Don't make the hair that big unless it's something like this [link] you did better here on the hair.
>> Then don't always use the wink. It somehow doesn't suit that pose.
>> For the bunny ears, try making it a slight bit longer (?)
>> Mmm for colouring, the right shoulder (facing me), it's got a bit too much detail. The left shoulder seems better. Try to equal them.
>> The hair colouring. The shadowing would be better if it was in a lighter shade of the shade you used for your shadowing
Well I guess that's about what I have to suggest about your art
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I absolutely love how you drew this character! The outfit and the little creature right next to her are adorable but there are a few things you could possibly work on such as the neck, it's a little to small for the head. But in overall very nicely done ^^.
I give you a
Also would you like a 
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wahhhh thanks so much!!!! ;v;
and alright ill keep those tips in mind
OOOOOh o-o
yeessss please *takes a bite*
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First of all you did great on the hair but maybe the white stripes look a little TOO dramatic in the light pink background.....also I love her outfit but....the little character on her right kind of doesn't really match with her. It looks so cute though and I 
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thank u :,D
and ohhh okaaaay!
and the character is like her pet ghost i think..?? idk its not my oc lol.
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Oh a pet ghost? That's cute 
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uhm i think so LOL.
and thanks again!! ;v;
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AWW thanks so much! >//<
hmm im working on that xDD
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She looks very cute i love the expresion~
Use more darker colors for shading so the colors can pop a little,use less highlights on the hair and that is it from me you are also getting a +watch~
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aww thanks so much!! <3
and okayyy thank u, i will use that advice!
and thanks so much again
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ikr the design is cute c:
but thank u!
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Here is your requested critique from ~
Negatives/Improvements
> Using more dynamic poses could really help the characters come to life. Looking at references of other poses is really useful to show you how the arms, legs etc should go.
> Using a bit more contrast between the light and dark tones will allow shadows and lighting to be more visible.
> With regards to you needing help on the hair and skin - there are many tutorials that could help you with these things but again, looking at photographs or other people's renditions of hair and skin colouring could really help you learn.
Positives
> The colouring is really soft so looks very pretty, especially on the skin and that gorgeous blue eye. The rosey cheeks and little rosey shoulders are really adorable too.
> The expression is so cute and I love those little bunny ears. There could be a few more details on the dress, but the rest of it, plus that little creature, has been done in a really cute style and shows the personality of the character well.
I hope this is useful for you~
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thanks so much for the critique c:
I will try to use the improvements/negatives into consideration on my next colored art
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You're welcome~ I'm glad to have helped.
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nice but i don't think the hair looks right. looks like it flat and not flowing. idk it just me.
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this is a late comment O_O
what do u mean my flowing? and idk either xD
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i don't know. it doesn't seems right to me. the flow looks unnatural.
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the hair flow looks to sharp. i think that is the problem
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the hair flow doesn't does with the hair outlines i think
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what does adc mean? o-o
thanks!
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typo
i mean "add" haha... u know i was sooooo dizzy and sleepy
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aww~ its so cute! i really would love to redline this but im not a corrector :/ is it still ok to redline it though?
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thanks!!!
redline, as in re drawing this?
im not sure if its okay bcuz this isn't my character..
but if u really want to re draw this, get permission from *Kawaii-paintbrush , its her oc c:
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oh alright, got it X3 thanks XD
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no prob! if u get to draw the oc, let me know
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Hi there! My name is Mimi and I'd love to be your corrector today! I can help you with the hair, the skin shading, and the anatomy as well. I do adore the contrast from all the pink to that beautiful blue eye. Would it be alright if I assisted you today?
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