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miki8263 — My new oc, Hanako

Published: 2012-09-08 13:47:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 1026; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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Description EDIT: Her name is now Hanako (i had a hard decision between 3 names..)
EDIT: added info about her

Been a while since i drew a new oc c:
(You may remember this oc from my WIP below.)
[link]

Anyway, I adopted her from -> [link]
I luv her design c:

Ive also been trying new coloring skills (i hav an unconsistent style).. and i like it, just a tiny bit.

i dont kno how to draw backgrounds so.... sorry for the ugly sky.

oh, like i said in the title, i cant think of a name for my oc, does anyone have suggestions? If u actually think of one i like, i might give u a very small prize in return.
no more name suggestions, but if u gave one, thanks so much! i had trouble between 3 names. the 2 other people will be allowed to get a llama and a free waist-up RAINBOW sketch request. the winner...uhm will get a llama and a flat colored waist-up..i guess.

You will kno who u r if i sent u a note.

okay, so heres a little bit of personal info about her

NAME: Hanako
Birthday: August 18
Likes: the environment, nature, flowers, bows, grass, friends, reading books, taking walks, relaxing, cute things, cake, animals
Dislikes: being angry, anything "ugly", rain, thunderstorms
Personality: She is warm-hearted, typically gentle, quiet and loyal. Is not easily angered, but when she does lose her temper, she can get...well, crazy and unpredictable. She's also sensitive and emotional when it comes to her friends. When that happens, she has a hard time controlling her thoughts and actions, which may cause her to hurt others. (sorry for horrible description OTL)

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( I would like some help on sky backgrounds, hair flow and clothes coloring.)
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Comments: 93

Xiairo [2012-10-24 13:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Hello, sorry that it's quite late, but here's your critique ~

Negatives:
I don't see many folds in her clothes. Folds are there when a little piece of cloth is changing direction. Drawing folds is hard, but you can look at your own folds in your clothes if you want to draw them. The amount of folds also differ in the kind of clothes and also in what position it is in. When clothes are being blown away a bit, like in this drawing, then there are quite a lot of folds in the clothing.
There's little shading in her skin, hair and clothes. You can use darker shades to create depth in the drawing. You can also use a bit different colours to give a bit depth, like for the skin, you can use for example purple for the really dark shades
Her hair doesn't flow really nice. When the hair flows (like in the wind or something), the flow mostly looks like a little wave. You can also add individual hairs to have the flowing effect more.
Her armpits are too high and her clavicles are standing a bit too far out of each other.

Positives:
The atmosphere is really nice, it gives a friendly and soft impression of the girl
I really like her design, it's nice to see that her ribbon is purple, wich gives a bit contrast to the green and yellow ~
Her expression is really sweet!

So, in short, the drawing looks really great and sweet, just pay a bit attention to the folds in the clothes, shading and the flow of the hair
I hope my critique was helpful for you!

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miki8263 In reply to Xiairo [2012-10-24 20:16:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the critique!
ill try to work on the folds in the clothes, shading and flow of hair.

i hav a Q tho..
what do u mean by: "her clavicles are standing a bit too far out of each other." im just a bit confused on what it means

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Xiairo In reply to miki8263 [2012-10-30 18:26:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! ~

Well, they're not really standing in the right place, I made a little correction to explain a bit better: [link]
The red line is the correction btw ~
I hope you understand it a bit more, I'm not perfect at explaining some things, sorry for that

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miki8263 In reply to Xiairo [2012-10-30 19:17:24 +0000 UTC]

ohhh okay thanks it helps a bit more c:

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Tokosha [2012-09-11 00:31:46 +0000 UTC]

found this once more. Hanako is niiiice! good choice!

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miki8263 In reply to Tokosha [2012-09-11 00:33:51 +0000 UTC]

wat do u mean by "found this once more"?
and thanks a lot c:

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Tokosha In reply to miki8263 [2012-09-11 00:34:59 +0000 UTC]

XD you edited it so it came in my inbox once more XDDDDDDDDD

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miki8263 In reply to Tokosha [2012-09-11 00:37:18 +0000 UTC]

ohhhh thats what u mean, lol xD

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miartish [2012-09-10 20:59:39 +0000 UTC]

she look so cute >^.^<

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miki8263 In reply to miartish [2012-09-11 00:06:24 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much! >//<

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MimiChu12 [2012-09-09 02:06:12 +0000 UTC]

How about Hanako..~? o:

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miki8263 In reply to MimiChu12 [2012-09-09 02:47:45 +0000 UTC]

maybe? ill have to think about it.
thank u for the suggestion!

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MimiChu12 In reply to miki8263 [2012-09-09 03:17:24 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh, Okay~
Welcome~~

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AkariAkariNightFever [2012-09-09 01:25:14 +0000 UTC]

Maybe Haruko? It means something like "spring child," I'm pretty sure.

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miki8263 In reply to AkariAkariNightFever [2012-09-09 02:47:31 +0000 UTC]

ill think about it c:
thanks for the suggestion

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HorsesRGangsta [2012-09-09 01:00:09 +0000 UTC]

Aqua

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miki8263 In reply to HorsesRGangsta [2012-09-09 02:47:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the suggestion!
but someone suggested that name too o-o

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HorsesRGangsta In reply to miki8263 [2012-09-11 06:55:07 +0000 UTC]

its a nice name!

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miki8263 In reply to HorsesRGangsta [2012-09-11 20:54:30 +0000 UTC]

thank u c:

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HorsesRGangsta In reply to miki8263 [2012-09-12 07:44:40 +0000 UTC]

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StrawberryCrescent [2012-09-08 21:40:30 +0000 UTC]

great picture! Maybe Lily or even Mint?

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miki8263 In reply to StrawberryCrescent [2012-09-09 02:46:09 +0000 UTC]

thank u c:
and thanks for the suggestions!!

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NanakoNyan [2012-09-08 18:48:37 +0000 UTC]

Midori. xD

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miki8263 In reply to NanakoNyan [2012-09-09 02:46:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the suggestion c:

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moon43 [2012-09-08 16:57:34 +0000 UTC]

She looks lovely!~ <333 I really loved her design as well~ But I had to let her go~ xD
Tips on hair flow- uhm, you could make the hair have more separate locks?~ Because hair kinda goes all wonky and stuff~
I used to draw hair all in one go LOL. But not I'm making sure the hair is not really connected to any other strands.
But there are exceptions for back hair cuz I'm lazy~

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miki8263 In reply to moon43 [2012-09-09 02:45:48 +0000 UTC]

thanks! lol, yeh
i dont exactly do that... so u mean a different color strand in one layer and a different color in another?
thanks for telling me
lol c:

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moon43 In reply to miki8263 [2012-09-09 16:27:39 +0000 UTC]

No problem~ Well not the colour of the hair, but the hair itself~

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miki8263 In reply to moon43 [2012-09-09 22:29:28 +0000 UTC]

c:
but i still dont get what u mean.. D:
i kno u said seperate layers for hair, but is for one strand a sperate layer, no right? probably not cuz it sounds crazy

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moon43 In reply to miki8263 [2012-09-09 22:52:41 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, I wanna do a deviant muro here. But I can't so I'll do it on your profile later~
I'll show you~ sdfsldf LOL, no not that~

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miki8263 In reply to moon43 [2012-09-09 22:56:21 +0000 UTC]

ohh, but why?
eh, u show me how to color?
and ikr, i totally knew it was wrong

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moon43 In reply to miki8263 [2012-09-09 23:00:00 +0000 UTC]

It'll just be about the hair maybe?
xD

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miki8263 In reply to moon43 [2012-09-09 23:01:17 +0000 UTC]

ohh okay
lol ill be waiting for the muro drawing then c:

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skyblue98 [2012-09-08 16:05:44 +0000 UTC]

for some reason she reminds me of sakura hime.......

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miki8263 In reply to skyblue98 [2012-09-09 02:44:25 +0000 UTC]

not rlly xD
but if u think about it, it might be, just a bit

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skyblue98 In reply to miki8263 [2012-09-10 02:16:11 +0000 UTC]

yeah...

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miki8263 In reply to skyblue98 [2012-09-10 20:14:45 +0000 UTC]

but really, its not like sakura hime c;

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skyblue98 In reply to miki8263 [2012-09-14 00:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I know.

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miki8263 In reply to skyblue98 [2012-09-14 20:06:08 +0000 UTC]

xD

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T-Rissy [2012-09-08 15:51:54 +0000 UTC]

Here are some good tutorials on Clouds, It's important to pay attention to the shapes of clouds, try and find reference photos of the type of clouds you want

[link]

[link]

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miki8263 In reply to T-Rissy [2012-09-09 02:49:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the links!! ill be sure to use them when i draw skies again!

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pepperh2o [2012-09-08 15:47:57 +0000 UTC]

Draia? Like dryad

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miki8263 In reply to pepperh2o [2012-09-09 02:43:57 +0000 UTC]

i never heard of a name like that..?
but thanks for the suggestion!!

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MotherOfTea [2012-09-08 15:41:40 +0000 UTC]

Cordilia

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miki8263 In reply to MotherOfTea [2012-09-09 02:43:42 +0000 UTC]

thank u for the suggestion!

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MotherOfTea In reply to miki8263 [2012-09-09 07:39:51 +0000 UTC]

No problem c:

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zDKAY [2012-09-08 15:30:33 +0000 UTC]

I don't know why, but "N" names come to mind. XD
Nina?
Great job on the pic by the way; I love how you color hair. (*.*)

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miki8263 In reply to zDKAY [2012-09-09 02:43:33 +0000 UTC]

lol okay xD maybe cuz she looks like a "nature" person?
thanks for the suggestion!
and thanks a lot! ^^

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LallieGirl [2012-09-08 15:09:00 +0000 UTC]

Lia? Beam? Aika? (Means Love song)
Bloom? Idk xD

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miki8263 In reply to LallieGirl [2012-09-09 02:43:02 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks for the suggestions!!
ill think about it

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LallieGirl In reply to miki8263 [2012-09-14 20:32:19 +0000 UTC]

Okki! NP! :d

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