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MikkiMarie β Hello Darling.
Published: 2013-08-05 18:47:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 5811; Favourites: 358; Downloads: 1
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Hello darling.I see you're hiding behind long sleeves.
I can see you trying to cover up your "ugly side" with gemstones and lace, with pretty clothes and make up.
But, hello darling.
You can show me.
Hello dear.
I see you're pushing away your dinner.
I can see you thrusting fingers down your throat into the sink, trying to hide your secret with laughter and smiles.
But, hello dear.
You can show me.
Hello honey.
I see you're hiding behind these precious things that the others care so much about.
I see you're upset with who you are, in fear that who you are might upset others.
I see you're broken, and I see, you're outspoken. You're lost and confused.
I see you're trying to hide something.
But, hello honey,
Hello dear,
Hello darling.
You can show me.
Because I don't care what they say about you.
I won't listen.
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Comments: 56
ur poetry is so beautiful im almost to tears. keep it up!
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:} Β hello, MikkiMarie-darling! yey!You made my day again.
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This is such a BEAUTIFUL poem!!! 
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This is so good! I love it 
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Oh, I love this! It's so true! Everyone has something they hide, and this portrays that wonderfully. It would make an awesome song.
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This is a really good piece.
Your imagery pushes past the "implied" and makes the reader sit up and see reality.
The "Hello darling" gives and ominous, almost creepy touch until the end, where you realise the narrator is the only one who truly cares.
I love it
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Well written, says so much about being a true friend
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Very tender.Β Makes me think of Mommy.
O///O Being consoled by Mommy anyway, not saying this to her
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I really, really like this! The tone is lovely and so is the message.
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Omgomgomg i feel like crying everytime i read the verse "because i don't care what they say about you"!!!! It's so damn cute!
I can't believe you just wrote it quick in the McDonalds, it's such... a masterpiece! Awesome work!
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I love it. This is one of the best pieces of literature I have ever read.
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Very nice, my friend. It was...tender. I think you might like my poems. My more recent writings are on disturbed1.com because my computer for some reason won't show me the box to write journal entries. If you're interested, here's a link that might work:Β www.disturbed1.com/user/77078/β¦
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kind of confusing but in a good, romantic way
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How is it confusing? It's about pain: cutting and purging, the hurt that one grows inside themselves for the sake of sparing the emotion of others. I hope that helps a bit
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oh I got that part, I just kinda found it confusing. well maybe just the end a little bit. 
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I wasn't criticizing, as I know I probably sound it: just trying to help Β
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Go home, you're drunk...
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it's lovely. i'm glad you didn't call it "hello sweetie", or use it as the opening line. that seems too light for the weight of your work.
just one critique: stanza one *clothes
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Β All I can say is 2 things. 1.ITS BEAUTIFUL
and 2.Thank you so much for giving me reasons to life!You point out depression and the thing's if I did this or if I killed myself.Thank you alot!I know you helped others too!You're art is amazing!
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This is something I really needed to read, thank you very much.
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That was really sweet!
oh and I don't know if anyone's pointed this out already but on the third line you put colthes instead of clothes. ^^
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Your description made me smile. I definitely would have had to make a Doctor Who comment XD
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Oh my gosh it made me teary eyed! Its so sweet! Β
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xD I like where you came up with this, it's really good!
Doctor Who FTW!!! owo
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