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MillieGriffin — C.C.2
Published: 2012-04-15 22:57:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 294; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Here's the sequel to Crap comic. I'v been very busy with three projects that I'm trying to finish, so I may be late more often. sorry, but don't worry I'll post what I can even if it's not that good.
first part here [link]
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Panels 12 and 13 are pretty confusing, consider dividing them along a diagonal instead of a perfect horizontal.
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I noticed that after it was done that after I'd already finished it, and I didn't want to redraw the panels so I numbered them. That's another reason these two pieces are titled "crap comic".
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Well I still would recommend keeping those two in that order but dividing them on a diagonal that makes them together the same height as the next two panels while still allowing the eye to follow the flow of the comic. It will add more interest to the layout of the comic and fit in with your American/Japanese hybrid cartooning style.
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Well there's one last crap comic until i run out. You'v never seen this one SO YOU CAN'T SPOIL IT. MUHAHAHAHA >8D
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....I didn't spoil the last one...
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you openly commented what was going to happen in this comic THAT'S A SPOILER.
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I said "I know what's gonna happen next-isn't there a little boy about to be adopted?" That's not really a spoiler...if anything, it throws the people off. There wasn't a little boy in the first comic, so they'd be thinking WTF?
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you know what never mind this is not worth arguing over.
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Heather you commented in the first one saying what would happen in this one.
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