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ladyz0e [2009-06-14 18:56:08 +0000 UTC]

For the critique club :0!

Very cute drawing. 'u'! I like the message, too. "we are artists and we draw crap thats around us ohoho!" '3'!

But theres some things I notice.
Her hands are too tiny. in fact her whole arm is a little thin compared to the body. Gotta be careful with that 'cus otherwise people will think she has a handicap or something. Also the way the pen is held is a little awkward. You should eyeball how you hold a pen when drawing something like this. Hands are soo tough and you gotta look at refs all the time to get it down right.

Also, the background. I like the idea of it, but I wish you didn't draw the circle of the wall with the same line as what you drew the figure in. It'd be better if we didn't see that line at all, so that the background would feel more uniform. With the message of the drawing, it'd be nice if the background was completely its own entity and the figure is just leaning on it. I guess the way it was colored, you couldn't really see where the wall started and the other background began? I just would like it better if that line wasn't there. Thats all 'u'

Otherwise, I luff it

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KasaiInuyoukai [2009-05-02 19:57:18 +0000 UTC]

Hiya! I'm from here to critique your picture! ^-^

Somethings I want you to take another look at are;

*The legs, as someone said, are too long compared to the body. When the average person brings thier knees all the way to thier body, the top of the knees generally reach just below the clavicals. On taller people they reach as high as mid-neck. Yours look like if we bent them in, would reach the middle of her nose! 0.0

*The arms, also someone mentioned they are too short. If you look at her arms-the upper arm is actually fine. The forearm is the problem. The wrist to the elbow should be about the length of her head. The hand is about the length of chin to the eyebrows. So her forearms are a bit too short. Also of mention-her hand position with the pencil is a bit weird. Her hand without the fingers shouldn't curve at all, and the fingers should be curled more towards the thumb to support the pencil.

*Next thing is the back-her position is possible but it hurts. The butt/lower back is sticking out and her upper back is curled. If her whole back had been curled, she would have looked more comfortable.

*Last note I wanted to say is the originality of this pic-I could have sworn I've seen this pic before except with a darker color scheme.... [link] is what it reminds me of. The color scheme in yours is different, and the pose is different. So I know the idea isn't that original, there was a new pose and a new take on it.

So I like this picture overall, the colors look good, the shading looks good. Minus the few anatomy details, this picture is great. I'd give it maybe....4/5 ^-^

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fusuichikaku [2009-04-28 02:08:09 +0000 UTC]

very pretty! i love the light effects ^_^
and her anatomy is done pretty well, good job XD

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Miriette-Le-Fay [2009-04-25 11:35:55 +0000 UTC]

ohh! That's simple but very well drawing. It make my eyes shine

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SparkCat [2009-03-28 18:22:56 +0000 UTC]

omg, I have an old sketch just like this!!
It's a person in that same position, but they don't have anything, just looking out the window.

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yumewosagashite [2009-03-21 23:34:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow!!! I love the colors and her pose!

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Rekslare [2009-03-18 09:36:45 +0000 UTC]

Awesome picture! I love the colors and the concept. The back might be a bit strange but I think its the arm that's holding the pencil. It looks like she's in a relaxed position but her shoulder's bent a bit too forwards. I guess you can either cut some of the back off or reposition the shoulder and a bit of the arm.

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Susaleena [2009-03-18 05:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Lovely colors and smooth shading!

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Mikiou [2009-03-16 16:09:23 +0000 UTC]

I luuuv the colors *__*
This is really great!

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Viichu [2009-03-16 01:33:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh my *//////////* I love the concept and the title the color for the skin is very nice~~
this is amazing ><

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moonless-dawn [2009-03-14 18:24:50 +0000 UTC]

great work!

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venerablewise [2009-03-10 16:24:17 +0000 UTC]

It shows stillness

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Vyntresser [2009-03-10 03:42:25 +0000 UTC]

GREAT job! there is one thing I can critique, but just on anatomy. I'm not sure if you were going towards the anime style, or 'freaky anatomy' as you said, but just some tips. Make sure the legs aren't TOO long. but if you are going to make them long, make sure the arms measure up as well The arms seem a bit small to me, but over all, everything looks very nice. It takes a lot to get me to click on someones thumbnail deviation and I seemed very drawn to yours! You did wonderfully

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Izene [2009-03-08 15:00:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow!Great background!

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ninapon [2009-03-01 17:28:48 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful:haert: o∀o!!!
you're great artist!>"<

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Hondai [2009-02-23 17:08:08 +0000 UTC]

The colors are so smooth *0* ~♥
I really like it! Kinda reminds me of when I'm about to start a drawing on a sketch book. I go into my own world...

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kiki-83 [2009-02-22 00:14:46 +0000 UTC]

sooooo goood!!!!!! i love it

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iheart-art [2009-02-21 22:45:31 +0000 UTC]

wow! that's really good! your becoming like a pro now!! or you soon will! lol

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cindyy-phan [2009-02-21 20:43:16 +0000 UTC]

I really like the overall composition and the concept of this piece~

All the effort you put into this piece really shows.
I really like the soft dreamy colours~

ugh..I cant use SAI properly. ;A;

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