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Published: 2015-03-24 18:31:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1264; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 2
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Previous | NextYou're gonna have to expect some ridiculous changes in art style and coloring in the next few pages
because I'm trying to find a nice "style" that is pretty and easy enough to draw (and this one's defintely a nope ;u; )
Anyways, Meet team Bosungi !
It would be awesome if you could correct any spelling/grammar mistakes :'D
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That cute Charmander tho! He didn't deserve to die!
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Oh gosh, that poor Charmander!
I must say, I really do like the coloring here! That transition from the black background to the white is really hella cool. And I may or may not be in completely in love with the beginning panels. cough cough. Anyway, this is rather interesting so far! Can't wait to see more!
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Awwh thanks a lot! ^u^
It took me a lot of blood and tears but I' really glad it was worth it.
..to be honest, I really started to like that charmander when coloring the page :'''D
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Looks great! I love the first part of this page especially!
In the fifth panel, it would be "I've lived too long in this place". Also it might be better to say "I've lived here for too long" or "I've lived in this place for too long". It flows a bit better. In the last panel aswell should be two seperate words. "as well".
Hope that helps!
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Aswd it helped me a lot thank you! ;u;
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