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Published: 2011-10-09 09:02:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 9779; Favourites: 110; Downloads: 81
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/edit: I changed panel 4 to a Dain reaction shot since the Jon closeup was sort of claustrophobic, and added an Alanna reacting panel after panel 5 (which didn't feel like it ended properly before). The pacing is a bit better this way, I feel
Note: I know she's supposed to hand her pitcher to Sacherell before walking over, but 1) I didn't want to design him and 2) I thought it gave Dain's reaction a better impact if she's introduced with the pitcher, since we immediately see that she's one of the serving boys and hence not exactly "champion" material.
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Alan is all like "hmm... D'you say somethin'?"
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Alanna is a badass. Also, that last panel is hilarious.
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I am about to die laughing, which would serious hamper my attempt to fav bomb your gallery...
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Alanna's somewhat tilted to the left - you might want to fix that, since she looks like she might fall over. :/ But all those shots of Dain are fantastic. And that last panel is hilarious! It made me giggle.
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Ah I can always trust you to catch awkward angles, thanks
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oh alanna <3 your depiction of her is just making me love her more and more
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OOOOOooooo! Alanna's REALLY going to kill him for calling her small. I can't wait to see her kick his but!
Wonderful work
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ALANNA OMG I LOVE HER FACE!!!!! Wish i could see a whole book of you're comics already drawn instead of waiting but that just makes the wait so much better when i get to see one
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Dain's expressions on this page had me laughing so hard, especially in comparison to Alanna's fairly indifferent look on the last panel. Really amazing work!
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