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miririri — Kiriban- False Signal
Published: 2012-10-06 09:13:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1041; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 12
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"No! Stop! Why are you doing this?!""Because, you are..."
"So what if I'm not "real"? So what if I'm artificial? Didn't you make me, my whole existence, also all my feelings?"
"You... don't you get how dangerous you are?"
"I know! That's why I stayed here! I promise... I won't do anything, so please... don't let me be just a false signal..."
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pretty proud of this, I guess~!
~JuiceCream 's kiriban for catching the 2000th view :3
THANKS A LOT FOR MY DEAR FRIEND WHO LENT HER SCANNER TO ME /o/
for those who have commissioned me a digital drawing, sorry but you guys will have to wait till I get a new tablet (about 26th october 2012) rip.
The theme is "artificial" and i wanted to try analogous color scheme and negative painting, so here you go~
Tools:
- Faber-Castell Albrecht-Durer Aquarell,
Sepia Hell/Light Sepia 177
- Sakura Koi Waterbrush#6 (Medium)
- Lyra watercolor brush #00
- Canson Aqua Watercolor Paper (A4)
Time Spent: 4 days
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Comments: 14
Here is your requested critique from ~ (Sorry for the wait 
Negatives/Improvements
> First of all, I think you should have used a slightly different colour for the background because I'm finding it a little difficult to tell what different things are.
> A few more details in some areas would have worked well - especially on the background and eyes/lips I think.
> Extra tones in some areas would have helped to enhance the lighting and contrast between the shadows.
Positives
> The emotion in this is brilliant and has been portrayed perfectly through the character's pose and expression, as well as the relatively dull colours. You've definitely managed to capture the audience in the moment with this piece.
> The hair, anatomy etc all look stunning! The shading on the skin is perfect too, and I love the way that hand is outstretched and you've got the size differences between the hand and body so well!
> The composition of this piece is amazing - you've put it all together really well and coloured everything beautifully - adding tones in all the right places (though a few more tones would have looked good too I think).
> The little details such as the way she is started to disappear look absolutely stunning!
You've done a great job with this~ Well done!
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:3 You're welcome, meow!
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by spending a lot of time grieving over a lot of people's artworks better than mine. orz
and grieving about my bad english.
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XDDD You seem to put a lot of time into your artwork. Wish I had the dedication to put in that kind of effort for anything o 3o
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mah it took long because of university assignments getting in my way of doing it .3.
tips: listen to music or something when you draw, works wonders~
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;OO i've actually never tried that. I will try that.
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it's meant to be sad ;__;
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Ugubugfbugu I've already told you but I love this so much ;A; Thanks a lot, again <3
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