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Published: 2014-04-02 17:39:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1191; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 2
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EDIT: Okay I legitimately hate this page. Like I'm going to delete it shortly and rewrite it completely.I don't usually do this but the more I look at it, the more I can't stand how it worked out. I'm going to think it over and seriously consider re-doing it.
Not gonna lie, after
Still gives me a chuckle.
Oh man we're actually almost done with this arc, I'm pretty sure it's been going on for almost a year or something. Went on much longer than I intended I'm really sorry about that.
Kenneth, Ruby and sChIzO (c)
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What's wrong with it? I don't see the problem. Is it the language, maybe? Well, in my eyes, it's cool. But hey, you are the artist and I understand how artists feel about some of their works. If you think you should re-do it, go ahead, bruh. I bet it will be better!
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Oh believe me the ending will be better when it's over with. I think so at least.
Also I don't want to paint Cassidy as some sort of nutcase either. She comes off that way.
Also Ruby comes off pretty cold in this
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Huh, it turned out much better. Looking at it after the new page, it does look rushed.
Good work, it is certainly a good improvement.
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Ahaha thanks. It was bothering the hell out of me
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The hell is that girl's problem? What could possibly be mad about, and how could it possibly be the MUTE'S fault?
She went from cool to crazy in about a second. T_T
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Ahaha well fortunately I decided to change this comic. I was honestly so dissatisfied with how it came out that I replaced it with this one
mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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Kenny's such a badass... Just one girl after another...
*white suit and diamond cane*
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ahaha well either way this isn't the right comic anymore
mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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sorry? why you say that? 
idk how you would have paced it together better but hey, its still good. I love rubys response and Kenny's XD
im being optimistic please shoot me XD lol
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Ahaha well thanks but I still was so upset with it that I sat down and re-did it completely.
Honestly I think this is better and ultimately will portray all characters involved more accurately.
But thankyou for the optimism UvU
Here's the proper comic nowΒ mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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Ahaha
she does.
I replaced this comic though so yehΒ mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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I still think Ruby's the one in the wrong here, being such a jerk about it; Cassidy wouldn't have swore or kicked Kenny out like that if she didn't care what he thought of this 'other girl', who is obviously Ruby.
Hell, I think Ruby's in the wrong a lot of times to be such a stuck-up jerk, and I have yet to see a proper moment in which she gets her comeuppance or which her character develops even slightly. If I've missed something along those lines, I'm disappointed, because it might have been important, but wasn't developed well enough. Right now she seems less like someone who legitimately suffers from schizophrenia, and more like a total jerkass.
Honestly, I really hate to say all this, because I love reading sChIzO, but I wouldn't honestly say anything if I didn't care about where the story was going. If someone were to look at my written work, like the Rebuild of Arcadia, and tell me I screwed up on a character's disposition or reasonings, I'd assert they'd care a lot about where the story goes, so trust me when I say I mean only the best intentions here.
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You're right there. Ruby is a jerk.
That's in her character honestly.
She'll learn eventually. This arc is just dragged out too long.
Regardless I hated this comic and how I portrayed Ruby AND Cassidy so I re-did it completely.
mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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Not really.
Either way I replaced that comicΒ mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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Kenny got laid with some girls by doing nothing lol
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Aha he didn't get laid at all
Either way I replaced this comic with this oneΒ mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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Awww... sad ending. Especially since she seemed kinda nice and Ruby refuses to admit she likes Kenny.
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Haha well luckily I replaced this comic.
It's better I thinkΒ mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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Yeah she does
Of course I have now replaced the comic so yehΒ mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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Replaced, or submitted one in between?
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Replaced it completely. I flat out hated where this comic was going *shrug*
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Fair enough. You are theΒ artist and the writer!
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She sure tries hard to pretend she doesn't care.
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She does that yeah. She's like that.
I replaced the comic though with this oneΒ mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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Yeeeeh well I hated how I portrayed her that way, it seemed inaccurate so I re-did the comicΒ mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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I dunno, would a bimbo/slut have cared that there was another girl? O: /shot
But good for Kenny for nipping that in the bud. And gee, Ruby, thanks for the concern xD
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Who knows *shrug*
Either way I replaced the comic anywayΒ mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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Ah yes Ruby, act like choosing to be sexually active is a horrible thing. Because there's people out there who beat animals for fun, and murderers. But no, go after the girl who's just horny.
But what happened in there, and how did he get out? It's just some symbols, that doesn't tell us much.
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Well those issues aren't present in their current situation anyway
But whatevs cause I re-did the comic anywayΒ mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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I already commented on that one. XD You can just hide the one here. I changed my mind.
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The symbols are a universal sign of profanity. In other words, Cassidy kicked Kenny out for being in love with another.
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He never even said that. He just didn't want sex. Yeah, kind of messed up for her to throw him out like that, I gotta say. But... actually... yeah, I take back what I said before. This girl's a jerk. Doesn't matter if you wanna be sexual with someone. No means no, and if you flip out of that, you're a jerk.
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She does, she really does
I replaced the comic thoughΒ mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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Almost a year? What a weekend! Then again those few minutes in there must've felt like an eternity to him.
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Ahaha yeah it's been a while between hiatus's and other setbacks
Also I replaced that comic with this oneΒ mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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Poor guy...oh well, at least she won't trouble you for a while.
Bimbo, yes. Slut....very much? xD Good points there Rubs
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Ahaha well I replaced the comic so forget all thatΒ mister-saturn.deviantart.com/aβ¦
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Woohoo, safe at last. Though I doubt we've seen the last of those two.
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Ehehe yeah. I replaced the comic though so forget all that
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I like how Kenny gets red in the face when Ruby starts talking
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