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Published: 2004-01-23 08:45:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 379; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 68
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Description “Mistaken Love” –a vampires seduction

Resistance
Hot breath on taut skin,
Toes curl, eyes dim.
A faint beat, a heart that belonged to no-one.
Promises pass parted lips,
Secrets told, trusts broken.
A lie whispered, deceptions laid like prison bars.

A Puncture
Warm verse flows from silken tongue,
Words lost, melodies forgotten.
A soft moan, a voice that was once so certain.
Faded memories touch on broken thoughts,
Smiles shared, tears hidden.
A life surrendered, given up in search of flesh.

Submission
Desires fulfilled by force,
Hungers met, wills broken.
A pale body, etched by a single scarlet kiss.
A frail form coated in soft moon light,
Love untouched, life stolen.
A tainted lust, betrayal worn as skin.


The lover flees into the night,
A crimson smile playing on his face.
Thoughts of a new love,  
A hunger that drives him onward.
Until the next nightfall,
The shadows his only devotion.
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Comments: 13

metavoid [2006-02-23 02:41:47 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous & sexy again, i love your use of words

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neostryder [2004-07-30 03:45:07 +0000 UTC]

sounds like an ode to Meier Link
(those of you who know who im talking about are cool)

But i guess he wasnt as um... Flighty >_>
(punny ^_^)

*goes off to read more poetry*

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MichaelB999 [2004-02-05 08:37:46 +0000 UTC]

excellent piece. your words are very detailed and describe well. Awesome picture too.

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label-me [2004-02-04 04:29:37 +0000 UTC]

love this, even the flowery, showy (ok, dead rose flowery) parts

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modestmelon In reply to label-me [2004-02-04 10:53:32 +0000 UTC]

I like that.. Dead rose flowery parts.. Thanky for the +fav Made my day!! And I'm glad you liked it! Stop by any time

*smiles*

-=Modestmelon=-

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label-me In reply to modestmelon [2004-02-04 12:07:35 +0000 UTC]

mmm..I stop by often, but...I've been kind of inactive keyboard-wise. I'm having issues. With the stickiness. And loudness. Long story. ;]
I love to make yuor day. Are you free for a day-maiking appearance by yours truly next pens day planner: Thursday afternoon between 2pm and 8:45am? If you aren't available or need service sooner, please press the pound key. If you are finished, hang up now.

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modestmelon In reply to label-me [2004-02-05 07:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Stickiness and loudness... Do I even dare ask?

# # # "Service!!!!"

*click*

Stop by anytime my dear

-=Modestmelon=-

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syphix [2004-01-23 21:10:41 +0000 UTC]

love it. awesome work. see, thats poetry i can feel... very deep.

u own. take it easy

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modestmelon In reply to syphix [2004-01-23 21:14:37 +0000 UTC]

Ahh Thank-you Syphix. Iv'e been away too long. I'll try to flesh out some new work soon. Glad you stopped by

-=Modestmelon=-

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syphix In reply to modestmelon [2004-01-23 21:20:25 +0000 UTC]

no problemo!!

just what friends are for eh?? take it easy

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Demonic-Lucifer [2004-01-23 08:48:59 +0000 UTC]

*nods* love this, very nice, keep up the good work.

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modestmelon In reply to Demonic-Lucifer [2004-01-23 09:34:34 +0000 UTC]

Why Thank-you. I appreciate it.

-=Modestmelon=-

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Demonic-Lucifer In reply to modestmelon [2004-01-23 09:58:46 +0000 UTC]

No worries

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