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modestmelon — One Beginning - Two Ends
Published: 2003-06-27 16:49:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 228; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 48
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I had you once, and you had me.My soul given up, yours set free.
My life a shield, not bullet proof.
Your life given up, all too abused.
Why did you have to go?
Left me here…
Cradling the love that used to be.
Watching your soul escape your eyes.
Drying the blood that helped me to survive.
Just a shell…
My last breath, your last wish.
Iv’e done what you asked, tainted my blood.
Faced the sky, closed my eyes.
Dreams escape…
Two bodies without a light…
Two loves dimmed in flight…
One beginning, two ends.
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Comments: 8
now this is scary as hell... and yet cool
btw. thanks for your 2 comments.
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Totallity plus. ^^
I just love how this piece is quick to the point, it just starts and ends with a good flow. I had to read it a couple of times before I got the message. and the image is just so a-prop-e-ate.
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i love this picture so much that i have to put on my favorit deviantions,, if u don't mind of course :]
keep up peace out ;D
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Aww. yet another sadness poem...
but hey,
its your poetry, its your point your trying
to get across.
and you did that very well
keep sending them out,
ill keep rerading them...
(no matter the drearyness ^_^)
remember-
dont write poetry outside the box.
write as if there is no such thing.
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Very touchy poetry. Awesome emotions plus great image too.
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great work. A very well written poem and i also like the little photo manip you did also
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Nah it doesnt need to cheer up, its great as is.
I find it very romantically beautiful.
~Kandice
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Great poem, but I think the subject needs to cheer up
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