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MohawkRex — The Missing Ingredient page 3
Published: 2013-11-19 02:47:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 3251; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 14
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The third page for comic which is a romance story between his OC Applejuice (the yellow earth pony) and Applejack.Page 1 : mohawkrex.deviantart.com#/art/…
Page 2 : mohawkrex.deviantart.com/art/T…
Based on the fan fiction 'The Missing Ingredient' by
ponypoetry.deviantart.com/art/…
I tried spacing the panels in this one to see if it helped with the clustering of the last two pages, it does look better but I think thats more to do with the palette than the framing.
Quit hard drawing ponies kissing, looking at stuff helped, he's got some great kissy pics in his gallery.
One more request and i'm done, yay, just in time for season 4.
Lines drawn with Sakura Pigma Microns
Colours... derped with Promarkers
The My Little Pony brand is owned by Hasbro
The Friendship is Magic universe was created by Lauren Faust and her team
The yellow earth pony is owned by
EDIT: So, alot of people have brought up the fact that they seemed to kiss a little quickly. That's kind of my bad, I was mean't to put a little time stamp saying 'several hours later' implying that they spent the whole day together in the top left corner but I forgot... derp!
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Very dense composition. Moving into the country de-cluttered it, but it is still super-saturated and very, very drawn. There's more to your art than the original story. Though Big Mac always struck me as a straw hat pony.
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You sir/madam use big words and I am a rather simple fella so... thank you?
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Is this digital or traditional then scanned? Amazing either way! 
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Hey dude... dont you think that was... a.... little too Fast? I Mean it would be good to, ya know, get more time for they both know each other, accept each other... more action before the Finaly.
But your art and Style are Great what I most like on Fan Art, its not how close to the Original they get, but how original they become from Artist itself.
Great Work
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Wow, this is a real thing, i'll edit the info thing so that I don't keep having to say it.
Thanks for the compliment though.
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Aw... How cute!
You should try my fanfic next for a comic!
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I'm sorry fella, i'm done with requests for a while.
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*drops 150 page fanfiction in a shock*
...you are?
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I hate to repeat what others have said, but it does seem like that kiss happened a tad quickly.
But, after taking some time to really pay attention to the comic, I can see from the sky that it's suddenly turned to night. Meaning a bit of time has indeed gone on since Applejuice volunteered. And I will say that the two do make for a cute couple in that last panel.
You really did a good job on the kissing panel, Mohawk. Their faces and the scrunches look just right. And I also like how you did the stars and clouds.
The only thing that I think could have been added and helped bridge the time gap, would have been a short time caption, and maybe a quick splash page showing AJ and Applejuice working together for the day. The latter assuming there was time, of course.
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Those are good ideas, I intended to add a time caption but forgot, my bad. The splash page is a nice idea but I only do 3 pages max per request... other wise i'd never get any of my own stuff done.
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I know this is a request and all, but I still find it hard to believe she'd do something this quickly, even in the fantasies of others... Perhaps I'm just too old fashioned when it comes to romance.
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That was kind of my bad, I was mean't to put a little caption in the top left corner saying 'several hours later' to imply they'd spent the entire day together. Granted that still isn't that much time but would that have made it more plausible?
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Ah! Don't take that as me being negative about this, I do like your art, wouldn't be watching you if I didn't, I just think a normal look on her face would have been better at that point in time.
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Hmm... A few hours can be enough actually, but I doubt AJ would be the one to say that before hand, or at least with the look on her face that it implied her.
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That escalated so fucking quickly that not even my dick while watching porn would be able to respond as fast...
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Don't be sorry, be proud of it xD
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You just need more practice young padawan, I can pop a fully in about 8 seconds on a good day.
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I will defeat you one day, we gotta take a race...
...
Wait, what are we talking about again? (lol)
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Wow! sure he is day dreaming XD
You nailed the drawing of the kiss... well, maybe he should looks a bit surprised. shouldn't he?
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Depends how fast she went in for it I suppose, hrrrm *ponders*.... I shall go and ask some folk on the street!
*several minutes pass*
They were shocked, yes.
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Excellent work! *Takes note* Now we can release a note to the press: It was shocking!
XD
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nope, didn't know it. Then you have a very lucky OC
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With happyness I suppose, I do requests not commissions, I don't really think i'm up to snuff yet.
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very well...
you deserve a noble prize for your modesty
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Well fanfiction is kind of like dreams I suppose, just on paper... and userly with a load of spelling and punctuation errors.
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As long as you like it guy, i'm good.
I'm not gonna be taking any more requests for quite a while but keep an eye open.
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I know, not really my story though.
Where you been fella? I'm sorry I left your request till last, it's actually been 50% finished on my laptop for almost two months but it being digital I puss out every time I load it up. You'll have it by the end of the week, I think you'll like it, it features a particularly LARGE German tank that may or may not have wrecked the shizz out of the competition during WW2.
*cough*-iger*cough*
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Oh don't worry about it. I mean its nothing urgent or anything.
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