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Published: 2010-05-07 22:10:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 483; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 4
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Description She refused to let terror take over. Even as she ran from her pursuers, she refused to let them kill her. She wouldn't give up. She would keep running, she felt she was too young to die. She had her family, her husband and two kids. She wanted to see her kids graduate from college. She wanted to have grandchildren. She simply wouldn't let herself be killed.  But sadly, her pursuers had other plans for her. Too bad the girl was at the wrong place at the wrong time.

The girl didn't even know the identities of two guys who were chasing her.  She never even saw them until a few minutes ago. But she witnessed them murder someone. She didn't know who they had killed, but she saw the whole thing.

Off course, her pursuers couldn't let her live. She had seen their faces and watched them commit their crime. The two were used to killing people. It was almost second nature to them. So killing this woman wouldn't be that hard. She had nowhere else to go. And at the hall it was a dead end. Then they would have her. They already had it planed.

The girl wanted to scream for help, but the building was in was empty. No one would here her. She also didn't want to show the two men she was scared. Even when she saw the dead end, she still wanted to believe she would make it out alive. She kept running until she got to the wall. She turned around and looked at her pursuers. They told her to get on her knees and to put her hands behind her back.

At this point, she gave up. She finally accepted the fact that her fate was sealed as soon as she saw the two. She finally understood that as she was running away she was already dead. And as he put the gun to her head, she realized she would never see her loving family again.  As he pulled the trigger, she let terror take over.  And as the bullet went thru her head,  she finally screamed.
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Comments: 14

ElectricApple [2010-06-11 19:47:43 +0000 UTC]

there were a few tiny grammatical errors, i think. "here" sounds like it should have been "hear" in part of it.
i really liked it though, it gave me the chills. (:

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moonlight576 In reply to ElectricApple [2010-06-12 01:34:15 +0000 UTC]

thank u for telling me. and im very happy u liked it. ^^

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crazyanimegurl [2010-06-03 22:44:22 +0000 UTC]

I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS!!!!

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moonlight576 In reply to crazyanimegurl [2010-06-03 22:49:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks! ^^ i write alot of scary stories. ^^ happy u like!

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crazyanimegurl In reply to moonlight576 [2010-06-03 23:00:46 +0000 UTC]

no problem! you could really have a job as a writer with peices like this!!!

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moonlight576 In reply to crazyanimegurl [2010-06-04 15:29:27 +0000 UTC]

really? thanks so much,again!

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crazyanimegurl In reply to moonlight576 [2010-06-04 20:19:50 +0000 UTC]

no problemzz!!!

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moonlight576 In reply to crazyanimegurl [2010-06-05 16:36:15 +0000 UTC]

^^

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puccaandgaru1234 [2010-05-10 18:21:41 +0000 UTC]



Wow... um... O.o

Wow...

ITS AWESOME!!

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moonlight576 In reply to puccaandgaru1234 [2010-05-11 20:25:10 +0000 UTC]

THANKIES!!!!

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SeaOfFireflies [2010-05-08 01:21:43 +0000 UTC]

omgsh it was scary o.0
Man, you got some talent! Good job

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moonlight576 In reply to SeaOfFireflies [2010-05-08 19:32:03 +0000 UTC]

thank u so much!!!!

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SeaOfFireflies In reply to moonlight576 [2010-05-10 02:42:55 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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moonlight576 In reply to SeaOfFireflies [2010-05-11 20:25:47 +0000 UTC]

^^

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