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Published: 2010-06-03 08:45:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 878; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 0
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Description ...save them.

EDIT: I changed the file, and it's more dramatic now. Old one is here: [link] It shows everything I did (and did wrong), so yeah.

So I remembered the pic of Mai crying and such and then thought about my current favourite OC, Sven.

Since Svenny isn't one of those stupid guys that go "crying is for wimps", he actually grieves, mourns and cries.

When he cries, he cries for hours. xD He tries bottling up his feelings most of the time to look cool though. Especially in front of Tora. (He fails at bottling stuff.)

SO HERE'S THE STORY FOR THIS:

When he was desperately trying to reach them, he knew he wouldn't make it.
He still tried to reach his beloved siblings before it was too late.

But he couldn't get there fast enough.
He found them bloody and bruised on the floor, still breathing, but dying.
And he couldn't save them.

So he held them both, and told them, "It will be okay, soon..."

And so he cried there, holding them as they died in his arms, unable to do anything to save them.

He was still there until some of his family found them, two days later.
Through those two days, he still held them, grieving for his lost brother and sister.

d o u s h i t e . . .

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Comments: 17

dibstah [2011-12-27 05:13:04 +0000 UTC]

So sad

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LostEyesTodayDead [2010-06-11 21:50:33 +0000 UTC]

Very nice i love it and the story was beautiful as the the picture but in a dark, mysterious way like a gothic castle. REAL men can cry, and they look good while crying!!

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Moonlightalis In reply to LostEyesTodayDead [2010-06-11 21:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. x3

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fullmetalkittn [2010-06-03 22:19:18 +0000 UTC]

Very dramatic scene!

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Moonlightalis In reply to fullmetalkittn [2010-06-03 22:21:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Leda-Chan [2010-06-03 21:10:41 +0000 UTC]

aw, how sad....

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Moonlightalis In reply to Leda-Chan [2010-06-03 21:12:06 +0000 UTC]

I know. xD I was listening to sad music and nearly cried when I was drawing it since I imagined the scene. OTL

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Leda-Chan In reply to Moonlightalis [2010-06-03 21:24:52 +0000 UTC]

I know what that's like! I write a story and was bawling when I wrote a death scene....

I love how you could really bring out the despair and sadness into the drawing, btw!

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Moonlightalis In reply to Leda-Chan [2010-06-03 21:28:40 +0000 UTC]

I roleplay a lot of sad stuff xD Sometimes it really gets to me.

Thank you! That's what I was aiming for. >w<

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Leda-Chan In reply to Moonlightalis [2010-06-03 21:30:07 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!!! Then you definitely achieved your goal.

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Katkurse [2010-06-03 14:23:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is really good,
I didn't know Sven had those cute fangs.
I giggled at the part about how he tries to act all cool around Tora.
Story was sad :<

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Moonlightalis In reply to Katkurse [2010-06-03 16:24:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuuuu.
He does, I'm just usually too lazy to draw them. xD
Why wouldn't he?
Sven's a stress magnet.

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Katkurse In reply to Moonlightalis [2010-06-03 17:15:55 +0000 UTC]

Psh~ I know she's sucha babe xD

He's also a chick magnet :'D

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Moonlightalis In reply to Katkurse [2010-06-03 18:20:01 +0000 UTC]

xD Totally.

OHOHOHOHO.

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XxDarkness101xX [2010-06-03 11:29:34 +0000 UTC]

lovely drawing, it really gives off the emotion and sadness he's going through, and i enjoyed reading the little story about what happened, all in all i think you did a great job here

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Moonlightalis In reply to XxDarkness101xX [2010-06-03 16:24:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuu.

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XxDarkness101xX In reply to Moonlightalis [2010-06-03 19:02:41 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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