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Description They sure bring a crowd ^^

My latest drawing, a study from a photo. I'm really happy with the final outcome actually!
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NaomiofMontferrat [2013-12-15 11:37:48 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


This one really is quite realistic. I honestly feel like I've seen the photo this is based on before, but I can't for the life of me remember which it is.

Pros:
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/>Excellent anatomy, particularly in the shape of the breasts. They look heavy, yet perky, which looks good for her.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/>Colouring and skin tone. You managed to keep everything looking good in spite of using a different skin tone than normal, which means you're good at maintaining variety across the colour spectrum.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/>Details, such as the shadow of her earring, the twist of the bikini strap, and the bit of extra glisten along the edge of her glasses.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/>Rather realistic face, though I suppose this goes without saying given that it's based on a photo.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/>The shading looks good, particularly being adjusted for being a bright, sunny and outdoorsy situation without much backlighting. Good work.

Cons:
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/>Her right strap (our left) is digging into her shoulder quite a lot. It's not a big deal, but since you prefer big boobs over breast expansion, I'd have assumed she'd have a better fitting bikini.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/>Somebody mentioned it in the comments, but her teeth do look a little off, almost like they're bent inwards (towards the inside of her mouth) quite a bit, or bent to our left. The angling much just be a bit off.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/>Her sunglasses kind of look like they're floating above her nose rather than sitting right on it. Might be a shading issue.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/>The hoop of her right earring (our left) doesn't quite seem to connect with her earlobe.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/>Her arm looks a little weirdly proportioned, with bulges and indents that don't seem to quite be where they should. I'll trust that the picture looked like that, though.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/>Sorry to include six, but this is just a nitpick about the background...that beach chair looks really melty.

I can't really give you high marks for originality considering it's based on a photo, but overall, you did a really good job. Photorealism really suits your style. I approve!

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Mooonjo In reply to NaomiofMontferrat [2013-12-16 08:10:04 +0000 UTC]

Wow, a 5 in technique! Thanks ^^

I'm glad I managed to get the breasts right, take that lopsided anatomy!

Haha maybe she just has a very small bikini? May be hard to get by one substantial enough for those puppies
Yeah I need to practice more on teeth (and mouths overall) I agree.
A bit more contrast in the shading closest to the glasses would maybe solve that!
Her arm looked like that in the reference yes and I tried to stay very true to it
"Melty" chair? Because of the colors, shading or something else?

Thanks for some great feedback one's again!   

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NaomiofMontferrat In reply to Mooonjo [2013-12-16 08:32:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

Yeah, good boobs are good boobs, no complaints there.

True, getting a properly fitting bra for boobs that big with someone as skinny as her...that'd be murder.
Well, it's not really an issue with the mouth as a whole per se. It seems to mostly just be an issue with the angling of the teeth. They're just angled weirdly and don't line up with her head quite right.
Yeah, that's what I was thinking. A bit darker along the very top where the glasses meet the nose would do it.
And melty because of the lines, really. Some of the lines are quite wobbly, particularly along the bottom, and the dip in the top bar combined with the bulges in the fabric on the right and the way the whole chair's angled...just makes the whole thing look really wobbly. It's a pretty huge nitpick, though.

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Mooonjo In reply to NaomiofMontferrat [2013-12-18 12:20:45 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I need to practice on teeth then! So hard drawing open mouths with teeth showing without the person looking totally derp hah..

Ah I see what you mean now regarding the wobbly lines of the chair. I may have rushed the bg a bit... The angle was pretty much the same in the reference though (the real world can look bent and awkward sometimes).

Thanks again! 

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NaomiofMontferrat In reply to Mooonjo [2013-12-18 13:27:59 +0000 UTC]

Well, to be honest, the teeth look alright, like teeth. It's just the angle that's off, rather than how the teeth look, really.

Yeah I kind of figured it was more of a product of not really minding the background so much, but I'm here to nitpick it into oblivion, so I figured I might as well point it out.

Sorry for any trouble!

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Mooonjo In reply to NaomiofMontferrat [2013-12-18 13:53:41 +0000 UTC]

Alright! No, not at all, you're always helpful  

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Forcedlactationlover [2018-07-20 18:59:10 +0000 UTC]

Even without quite such breasts, I think she'd draw a crowd anyway. Nicely done! 

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Jim-From-Hell [2015-03-04 10:27:02 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!!!

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PrinceCiel [2013-12-16 02:53:59 +0000 UTC]

YEEEZ.

SO GOOD I almost thought it was photo!!

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Mooonjo In reply to PrinceCiel [2013-12-16 08:01:44 +0000 UTC]

Makes me happy, THANKS

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mustang4eric [2013-12-14 17:50:09 +0000 UTC]

it almost looks real!!!  the dental work gave it away at first glance it was fake !!!!

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Mooonjo In reply to mustang4eric [2013-12-15 10:56:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! But yeah, teeth are HARD. A bit strange to call an image which is not photoreal "fake" though, lot's of fakes out there then

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Splicerion [2013-12-14 15:15:32 +0000 UTC]

O:

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