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Published: 2012-09-16 15:42:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 569; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 19
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Im back! Havent posted anything in ages
Very pleased with this! It looks better in reality though
Ermmm, feed back on the shading skill/technique would be much appreciated, as shading is something that i newly/randomly decided to try in this drawing. And, as ever, improvments wanted!
Naruto belongs to Masashi Kishimoto
The drawing to me
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My honest feedback: It looks ok (not really perfect like some others in the comments say)... You should go more into details and maybe take more time for your drawings. The shading technique looks kind of dirty and not realy planned. If you draw cleaner your drawings will automaticly look better. I hope my comment will help you to improve your skills because its hard to become better if nobody says the truth.
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Can you comment on this?[link] Its another one of my drawings; I know the hands too small/ really bad
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Thanks soo much 
Thanks again for honest feedback
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take so much time till you think you can't make it better 
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Ok
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try that and when you are good at it you will automaticly become better in shading...
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np
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Ok
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O:
OBITO Omg Nice It looks Perfect you have a lot of talent
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Thanks
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hay did you see my new ? [link] i colored it read the description
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Hmm, well ive never really watched hunter x series, but i think it looks cool, and the detail on the hair is impressive
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Nice! I would've made the hair a LOT darker. (Actually one even black tone with a marker or black pencil, it's black after all. So most the time it doesn't even have any shading details.)
I like how you drew the face. I can never manage to do the side view right when it comes to the nose.
Besides the hair the shadings awesome!
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Thanks 
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IT LOOKS AWESOME!!!!!
You could make the shirt darker though (its blending with the hair and face right now)
The badge needs to be more shaded....i would smudge mine but thats for you to decide
Abito has black hair so the hair should be dark (unless you wanted the way it is cuz then its all good ^.^)
But for a newbie at shading your pretty good
If you need tips on any more of your drawings just tell me and ill help you one newbie to another
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Thank you!!!!
Ok, yea, seeing it now...I definitely agree! 
Urm, so far ive never really shaded/ colored hair, but I think i shall from now on
Thanks
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i will comment when i have free time
(school is reducing my deviant time ;A; )
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Thanks
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Thanks!!! And super thanks for the
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Thanks
Any tips on shading? Its my first real attempt, so i would like to improve
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I think it looks amazing~!
Great job~!
Look forward to more of your works! ^^
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Thanks
Hehe, i will try, but not much time nowadays.
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It looks awesome! You did a great job with the shading! I would suggest maybe put a little more shading where the darker colors are. Like his shirt (I think its suppose to be blue), would be darker than his skin. It looks really good! I love how you drew his eyes!
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Thank you
Yes, i did put allot more shading in than my other drawings; i realized that shading makes a big difference to the standard!
Ok
Thanks again!
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Oh then its perfect! I never really seen Obito collared. I was just assuming his clothes were like sasuke's.
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hhehe thanks!
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lol... collared.. I meant colored.
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Thanks
My best I think
I tried shading this time too
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It looks great.
Keep working!
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Still Obito here though
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