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MooseFlame — The Genjutsu- Torment

Published: 2012-10-04 15:31:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 358; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 7
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Description Fitting title I think
This is taken from the amazing manga/anime scene. Oh yes, ignore the random blank corner (top left), as on the actual paper, its ripped off (the scanner decided to make it appear though, stupid scanner)

Naruto belongs to Masashi Kishimoto
This drawing to me
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Comments: 12

Daniel2k10 [2012-10-29 18:44:59 +0000 UTC]

In this one you also should go more into details and not draw over the lines And it's kind of dirty like the other one...

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MooseFlame In reply to Daniel2k10 [2012-10-29 19:00:33 +0000 UTC]

Ok I think the smudging makes it more dirty; shall I not do smudging on most cases, do you think?

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Daniel2k10 In reply to MooseFlame [2012-10-29 20:05:04 +0000 UTC]

yes try to shade without smudging and when you smudge do it softly

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MooseFlame In reply to Daniel2k10 [2012-10-29 20:24:40 +0000 UTC]

Ok

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AjNeverDies [2012-10-18 17:19:41 +0000 UTC]

Great job on this one. Love their reactions!

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MooseFlame In reply to AjNeverDies [2012-10-18 17:38:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Do you think the lighting effects allright, or too bright?

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AjNeverDies In reply to MooseFlame [2012-10-18 18:07:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah man its great

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MooseFlame In reply to AjNeverDies [2012-10-18 18:23:10 +0000 UTC]

ok

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ConverseFanatic [2012-10-12 05:33:38 +0000 UTC]

- The shading is good but instead of just leaving narutos hair white shade it in a little (lighter than sasukes hair)
-Maybe making sasuke's mouth bigger might make the drawing seem more simetrical(or is it proportionl...IDK)
- Also the hand is too small....the fingers should be way longer and the hand bigger.
-Other than that everything else is freakin perfect!
iI really love how you drew the eyes and shaded the clothes as well as sasuke's face. Its just magnificent! ^^

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MooseFlame In reply to ConverseFanatic [2012-10-14 15:13:29 +0000 UTC]

Ok. Yes, I can see the same thing. Ok; i was having alot of trouble drawing the hand as well
Thanks

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Silverfeather14 [2012-10-06 23:58:05 +0000 UTC]

I quite like this~! Great job.

The only thing that seems off is the mouth-but if that's the way it's supposed to be, it makes it interesting :3

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MooseFlame In reply to Silverfeather14 [2012-10-09 15:38:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
Urm, its not particularly off (Naruto's mouth is exactly how intended), but I could of made Sasuke's mouth longer

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