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Published: 2009-07-25 02:47:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 186; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description A hole
in my forehead
leaks into the
knots
in my shoulders
fire rolls down
and out
through fingertips
onto paper
and end in a
funny little fascination
of a ponytail
that stays without
a holder.
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Comments: 6

Plaugh [2011-07-19 01:36:55 +0000 UTC]

I like it. You don't have to do _Ulysses_ you know.

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mooshu17 In reply to Plaugh [2011-07-19 01:55:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, I don't have to _Ulysses_?

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Plaugh In reply to mooshu17 [2011-07-19 02:24:08 +0000 UTC]

James Joyce 600? page novel entirely in stream of consciousness. Some people consider it a work of Genius, some a pain in the...

I have never read it myself so I won't offer an opinion.

And it may not be 600 pages but it sure is one fat book!

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mooshu17 In reply to Plaugh [2011-07-19 13:30:42 +0000 UTC]

I've never read it either, and it has been many years since I've even heard it mentioned.

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Mahi-Fish [2009-07-25 03:07:13 +0000 UTC]

Not bad for a stream of consciousness style piece.

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mooshu17 In reply to Mahi-Fish [2009-07-25 03:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Heh, thanks

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