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Published: 2011-05-13 04:18:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 6836; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 24
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First of all thank you for the songs you gave me in the previous panel, I listened to all of them, I love it my current obsession is this song >> [link] "I'm not your toy" by La Roux ,

Secondly, I am sorry if there are grammar mistakes or the sentences does not even make sense, English is not my first language, I would be happy to correct or change them if there are mistakes, just point them out

Question of the day: Would you ask a guy out on a date? me and my friends been arguing about this

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Been wanting to do proper Dragon Age comics since DA: O came out but never had the chance, so here it is!!

"A PAIR OF EMERALD EYES"
It's going to be a short comic happening after Hawke became the Champion and Fenris killed Hadriana, another alternative for the outcome between Hawke and Fenris


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Comments: 27

Takara-dono [2011-05-24 17:53:00 +0000 UTC]

is the word balloon with the word 'kicked' a typo? shouldn't it say 'kick those guys...' ??

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moredot In reply to Takara-dono [2011-05-25 04:15:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh so it's not past tense? ok will edit it thank you, the balloon one is typo lol

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Takara-dono In reply to moredot [2011-05-25 21:46:11 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome! I really enjoyed reading this XD

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AngelandSkyler [2011-05-20 01:35:58 +0000 UTC]

ohh so theres a flash back?

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moredot In reply to AngelandSkyler [2011-05-20 05:21:23 +0000 UTC]

Yes there are two scenes for flashback

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AngelandSkyler In reply to moredot [2011-05-22 03:31:13 +0000 UTC]

oh ok makes sense now

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Vanessalisa [2011-05-16 14:44:14 +0000 UTC]

nice outfit

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moredot In reply to Vanessalisa [2011-05-16 16:38:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Vanessalisa In reply to moredot [2011-05-17 01:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Np

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Vanessalisa [2011-05-16 12:54:12 +0000 UTC]

that's your Couslands name right

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moredot In reply to Vanessalisa [2011-05-16 16:37:46 +0000 UTC]

Yes shamefully they share the same first name

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Vanessalisa In reply to moredot [2011-05-17 01:59:13 +0000 UTC]

no it not I'm using the same name too

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Addira [2011-05-16 02:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Mad indeed my dear angsty Elf...

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moredot In reply to Addira [2011-05-16 04:44:26 +0000 UTC]

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iralovesart [2011-05-14 07:06:39 +0000 UTC]

"My name is Bond... James Bond."
hehe, sorry couldn't help it

I just started on this comic, it looks nice so far, good work!

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moredot In reply to iralovesart [2011-05-14 18:23:33 +0000 UTC]

Yay!! thank you ^^ i'm happy you like the comic

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Caresse-par-la-lumie [2011-05-13 15:04:33 +0000 UTC]

Only error that I saw was in the first panel. It should be treat, not treated. Other than that, it's good. Now about asking a guy out. I say go for it. I did so and now years later I'm married to him.

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moredot In reply to Caresse-par-la-lumie [2011-05-13 18:04:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the correction ^_^ will change it when I'm home. It's nice that you took the chance, I myself do not have the courage- I guess I'm still very old school at the end he asked me out I'm so excited!! these..love games gives me headaches

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IJKB [2011-05-13 07:29:56 +0000 UTC]

ANOTHER PAAAGE!! <3 What program r u using? O_o

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moredot In reply to IJKB [2011-05-13 09:02:14 +0000 UTC]

I used photoshop


"Why is it that when there is a emo in a game, every body falls in love with that person?"
Because we feel for their pain, we reach out to them hoping to make them feel better - in return the unthinkable happen, we fell, deep. ok I'm rambling aahahahahah

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IJKB In reply to moredot [2011-05-13 09:14:39 +0000 UTC]

xD
even thought there is alot off "hate emo pics" and so on, we all loves emos C:

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christiline88 [2011-05-13 06:47:24 +0000 UTC]

Of course you are mad Fenris. thats what love does to a person besides COME ON mages are totally awesome!

to the artist: thank you for doing this comic I have not really commented on this comic before I believe but I have been following it for some time and I really do enjoy it. Please continue

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moredot In reply to christiline88 [2011-05-13 08:56:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for taking the time to comment ^_^ I really appreciate it, it makes me happy

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Ioik [2011-05-13 05:21:22 +0000 UTC]

Awwww

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moredot In reply to Ioik [2011-05-13 09:12:41 +0000 UTC]

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SilverSoul-Studio [2011-05-13 04:21:11 +0000 UTC]

Thats so awsome!

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moredot In reply to SilverSoul-Studio [2011-05-13 08:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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