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moreeman06 In reply to Akernis [2012-09-11 06:06:01 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you love it, I haven't done anything other than hash out what i want for ch.5 yet and with school/work I'm not sure when I'll be able to get it out but i hope that i can top this ch. with the next few and you didn't hear it from me but there will be a few big reveals that were hinted on in some of my other stories
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moreeman06 In reply to Akernis [2012-09-12 21:20:52 +0000 UTC]
Then let it begin.
The alliance... will die. As will your friends. Good, I can feel your anger. I am defenseless. Take your weapon. Strike me down with all of your hatred and your journey towards the dark side will be complete!
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Akernis In reply to moreeman06 [2012-09-14 09:29:15 +0000 UTC]
*smiles viciously while getting up*
Very well.
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moreeman06 In reply to Theodoricos [2012-09-11 06:16:34 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you enjoy it and that you can get so immersed in the story. And i'm very pleased to hear that you thought i did well with Chakwas i wasn't entirely sure if i was pushing her character traits to the point were i was exagerating a few at the expense of her character.
As for the voice over well I aim to please and corny voice-overs just remind me of old sci-fi B movies and well most may call them corny but the cinephile in me loves them
and thanks for the faves on both ch.s as i just told Akernis not entirely sure when I'll get the next ch. done but I hope it can top this one and the next few should contain some nice reveals as long as i don't get to sidetracked
Ok and that was embarrassing accidentally posted this as a comment instead of a reply
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