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Theodoricos [2012-10-12 12:29:46 +0000 UTC]
I apologize that it took me so long to check out First Impressions - it's rough when summer break's over and it's kind of difficult getting used to that again.
Anyway, I have to say that I really enjoyed this chapter, it's a nice way to get back into your story. I always find new content in stories set during the games themselves to be much more interesting than going straight through the already known plot, so this journey to Arcturus was a very neat addition to the storyline, one that I can definitely see happening over the course of ME1 - particularly after Therum, like you've established here. It's really neat the way the distinct atmosphere of ME1 is captured here, yet it's something definitely new.
The part with Tiberius visualizing an intimate scene with Liara stood out for me - I really enjoyed reading through that. You can certainly see that there's reciprocation already too, and that Liara might've had similar thoughts. The fact that Joker picks up on that is doubtlessly indicative enough.
Tiberius knows how to handle himself in politics, as well, and how to reason with people like the Rear Admiral. What he did is something that the crew will really appreciate, with an exception of a certain gunnery chief.
All in all, this chapter was very fun to read, and it's nice getting to see Liara and Tiberius connect more and more through additional scenes that could've happened off-screen in the game. Now I'm heading to read chapter six!
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moreeman06 In reply to Akernis [2012-10-04 04:39:12 +0000 UTC]
well I don't want to keep you waiting for long although i do have to say i may be polling you and my other readers in the near future as to whether i should let the story detour onto a certain path, (probably tomorrow) when i post ch.6
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