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blood [2009-05-08 16:10:03 +0000 UTC]
I like this concept/.
Allow me some time and I will return with a crit?
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blood In reply to Morgalahan [2009-05-09 06:24:59 +0000 UTC]
Awww...come on. That's no way to speak of a masterpiece.
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BlueNephelim [2009-05-02 15:49:21 +0000 UTC]
What a beautiful piece! I love the stone texture; it really does look like a mural...
For my only suggestion, I agree with Zocho - the eyes on both subjects seem focused somewhere off in the middle distance rather than on each other. If I were a better artist, I'd offer suggestions on how to fix this...but alas, I have no idea. -_-
Other than that, this is a wonderful bit of work. The folds in their clothing are especially nice, and give it a very Grecian feel. ^_^
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BlueNephelim In reply to Morgalahan [2009-05-04 10:58:27 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, this one looked like it represented a huge amount of time and effort. O_O' I will say, I sort of like the more slender, fey-like rendering of a young Poseidon; it's not something I've seen before and I think it turned out pretty well here.
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BlueNephelim In reply to Morgalahan [2009-05-04 11:22:38 +0000 UTC]
Well good luck with the competition! I'm sure you'll do great. ^_^
Yeah, this one makes me think of a more youthful Poseidon than the traditional robed-and-bearded garb. Heh, and I've had more than my fill of the "classical" Greek mythos; my husband is actually Greek and more than happy to expound on his cultural traditions. *eye-roll**husband love* He's our DM...and trust me, if you ever play a cleric in his game, you want to go with the Greek pantheon. Things will just work out better for you. ^_~
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BlueNephelim In reply to Morgalahan [2009-05-06 00:30:45 +0000 UTC]
Heh, they can't handle their manly gods displaying a more delicate side - makes them uncomfortable. ^_~
And sorry about your campaign! I hate it when DMs do stuff like that. Bill's not so bad; it's actually good to play any kind of good-aligned cleric in his games - it's just that if you worship a greek god, well, they have this reputation and you get a lot of NPC booty. O_o Which goddess were you a cleric of, out of curiosity?
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BlueNephelim In reply to Morgalahan [2009-05-06 23:51:59 +0000 UTC]
Heehee. Boys are funny... ^o^
Yeah, I know Shar. Forgotten realms, right? As I recall, not the nicest goddess, but she had some good domains...
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Morgalahan In reply to BlueNephelim [2009-05-07 18:59:10 +0000 UTC]
Yep, forgotten realms. I really liked her from the PC games, as in she was the goddess of Viconia from Baldur's gate, so I made her mine...then mr DM decides she makes a perfect villain *sigh*
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BlueNephelim In reply to Morgalahan [2009-05-08 00:15:49 +0000 UTC]
Aww, that's unfortunate. I never played any of the PC games, so I'm not sure how she was represented there, but I do recall her being a bit scary in the tabletop compendiums O_O Still, that's irritating.
Although we're currently having some interesting involvements with our PC cleric of Taia, who is one frightening goddess...
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Zocho [2009-04-25 10:12:13 +0000 UTC]
great work! ^_^ i love the textures you chose, it really brings the piece to life.
Only crits would be that the way the folding is painted in Amphitrite's top part makes her right breast look kind of flatter than it should be or maybe it's just me >_> also the eyes, though awesomely coloured (as always) lack something i cant quite put my finger on. She's not focusing them on anything, it feels as if she's staring at something else beyond the picture
overall great pic, the hand holding the shell is greatly done, well done hands always impress me for some reason :3
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Morgalahan In reply to l3ishop [2009-04-25 12:39:02 +0000 UTC]
Now that I look again, I agree with you about his arm. Originally his arm was in a different position and I had him leaning on something, but I decided that it looked stupid since there was nothing I could add that he could be leaning against, so I redid it with him holding the trident, which also added another Poseidon element to the picture. I think his arm might be a little too far forward now, and should be bent at more of an angle with his hand closer to his body. I'll see if I can change it, but I might end up leaving it like this, since I want to move on to other pictures, and this has already eaten up a few weeks of my time
I used Daz3D, the free program, which helped me, but I'm still learning how to use it. Mr. Fluffie is the 3d master here, not I
I will be practicing in the future with more pictures consisting of multiple characters.
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littlefluffie In reply to Morgalahan [2009-04-25 14:41:43 +0000 UTC]
I am far from master... the closest I could get to a title is a seasoned amateur, and even that is laying it on a bit.
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yami-caffeine In reply to Morgalahan [2009-04-24 22:30:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow, well you did a fine job! C: He looks great.
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littlefluffie [2009-04-24 20:00:18 +0000 UTC]
I would write a stunning critique, except apparently you need a subscription to do so... nevertheless, I will be writing an abridged version.
Firstly, my critique is divided into two parts: an irrelevant part that you can largely ignore, and the substantial part, which you may read and absorb if you wish.
The irrelevant part has to do with your subject matter. Being a Classicist, I do notice the absence of a beard on Poseidon, and that he is a bit scrawny. But that is, as I said, irrelevant to the matter at hand, but I felt I should express my puritan up-stuck-ness somewhere
Now for the relevant part. Overall, a subtle render of the subject. Its not flashy, and does not need to be, as the characters' poses convey the message by themselves. The only small flaw I find is Amphitrite's gaze... she does not seem to be focusing on anything in the picture, which can be distracting to the viewer, whereas Poseidon is clearly adoring his Queen. The unique characterisation is successful, I think. A very bishonen interpretation of the Greek god, but if interpreted in this light, succeeds. The subtle contrast of skin tones against each other is very nice. The only thing I fault in the colour scheme is the trident. I feel the black and red don't fit in with the rest. Perhaps a bronze would have suited better, to reflect Poseidon's skin tone (and the fact that his trident would have been Bronze, at least in the Iliadic times). Finally, excellent use of texture. The characters are brought alive by the careful attention to skin texture, combined with the aging of the bowl/disc in which the picture stands.
That's my 5 cents worth... tell me if I'm being pretentious
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Morgalahan In reply to littlefluffie [2009-04-25 12:42:56 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, I'll try, that should involve more eyelid and less eye showing. We shall have to see.
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