Comments: 31
GypsyMountainman [2013-09-08 01:36:15 +0000 UTC]
I love this one, I love to lay in nature, and feel the earth breath under me, to listen to it's heartbeat. you have captured that feeling, thank you
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InspectorMe [2013-08-19 15:47:47 +0000 UTC]
wow. This is great!
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MariaB9 [2013-07-15 11:12:52 +0000 UTC]
Amazing, I love it!
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Mysticstar875 [2013-07-14 20:05:30 +0000 UTC]
I don't know what's been up with me lately, but I am loving this nature poetry xD Love the alliteration and imagery, not to mention the personification. (By the way, overwhelming is one word and you may want to use the correct possessive pronoun when saying "The waters depressed thrashings..." If it's multiple waters, it would be waters' or if you want to talk about it as a whole, just water's ) You might want to change up some of the words that may seem repetitive, like ocean and land. Maybe use sea or earth instead. Does that make sense?
Over all, I loved it. Rock on in your movement to save the rain forests.
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fantasylover103 [2013-07-14 16:41:37 +0000 UTC]
Descriptions are amazingly put and entire poem is well written! Great job!
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enewport [2013-07-11 08:35:41 +0000 UTC]
Amazing, this is a beautiful poem.
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savathpray [2013-07-10 19:53:29 +0000 UTC]
Flagged as Spam
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