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mosspath — Spottedleaf's Heart Rewritten Ch. 2
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Published: 2018-12-13 04:09:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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    “ThunderClan warriors, to me!” Redkit, acting as leader, called. Brindlekit and Frostkit joined him in fighting the ‘WindClan warriors’, played by Willowkit and Spottedkit. Redkit tackled Spottedkit to the ground, flattening her. She batted at her littermate, trying to get him off without using her claws.

    “Okay, okay, I give up.” Spottedkit puffed when she remained trapped under her larger brother.

    “ThunderClan forever!” Redkit yowled proudly as he hopped off her.

    “That was a good job using your weight like that, Redkit!” Thistleclaw, who had stopped to watch the kits along with the elders, nodded approvingly. “Spottedkit, if that happened you would have been finished!”

    “Whatever.” Spottedkit muttered, embarrassed. Why doesn’t he go criticize his apprentice? She thought mutinously.

    “If that happens when you’re fighting a real enemy just remember--you’re in a position to reach their underbelly.” The warrior advised her.

    “Okay.” Spottedkit answered, feeling vaguely uninterested.

    “You’re just upset you lost.” Redkit bragged. Spottedkit shoved him.

    “Kits, behave.” Swiftbreeze, warming herself in the gentle newleaf sun, gently chided them. “Thistleclaw offered you some advice, Spottedkit, thank him. And Redkit, don’t boast.”

    “Sorry.” Spottedkit muttered.

    “‘M sorry.” Redkit echoed.

    “Thanks, Thistleclaw.” Spottedkit added. She felt uncomfortable under the watchful, intimidating stare of the bulky, scarred warrior.


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Comments: 3

jade-island-lives [2018-12-14 03:31:27 +0000 UTC]

With this rewrite and all, do have to wonder about Thistleclaw’s role.

Keep it up!

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mosspath In reply to jade-island-lives [2018-12-14 04:39:30 +0000 UTC]

i've redone his role in a way that i think will still be interesting He is coming up soon!

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jade-island-lives In reply to mosspath [2018-12-14 04:40:32 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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