Description
Name: Jade Orbash
Gender: Female
Age: 22
Race/Ethnicity: Tulian (Bantu)
Height: 5’6”
Build: Curvy
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual
Personality
Adventurous with a true love for discovering new things and travel. Adaptable to nearly any situation, actually prefers when there is a change as she has a short attention span. Doesn’t like talking to new people and usually prefers to listen but really enjoys when she has a chance to talk about something she’s interested in. Can make light of even the most serious situations, even when it really isn’t appropriate.
Other
-She has a hard time comforting others because she doesn’t get upset very often herself. She can come off as somewhat aloof
-She was orphaned when she was young, but she views her adoptive family positively
-Loves her work as a field agent, even though she just started the position. It is her dream job
-Has a thing for intellectual types
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I love Jade so much~
Comments: 15
FrostFeather42 [2018-02-13 01:32:28 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I love this! This is absolutely stunning. I love the cool undertones of her skin, her hair is G O R G E O U S and the shading and expression on her face is amazing.
Great work!!!
(from ProjectComment).
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CrazyPaintbrush [2018-02-12 02:11:18 +0000 UTC]
I am from ProjectComment and I am here to tell you a few things about this piece.
The shading is perfect, honest. To me it appears really smooth and in all the right places. The hair design is original, and the position is proportionate! That can be really hard, even for experienced artists! The colors you used here added on to this OC that you wrote was intellectual, so she would not be very serious in having bright, attention ganing clothing!
Now one I have to tell some constructive stuff so... the ears are a little small and seeing this as a more realistic type of art style you might want to fix that. Look at your self in the mirror and see how your face looks to figure out how to make that more proportional! Also the hair, while creative looks flat and I do not think that is what you were going for. Usually more shading would make it appear less flat.
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Mountny In reply to CrazyPaintbrush [2018-02-12 02:40:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your detailed comment!
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CrazyPaintbrush In reply to Mountny [2018-02-12 02:51:23 +0000 UTC]
No problem! But in all seriousness, this is awesome! You should be proud of what you did!
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theJfluffy [2018-02-12 01:59:52 +0000 UTC]
She's a very nice character!
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SnoByrd [2018-02-12 01:49:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm from ProjectComment and was hoping to give you advice on your drawing.
I love the shading. It's done to perfection and it really makes the character look 3-D. The lighting is also exceptionally done. The linework is clean and the colors are nice and fit her clothing.. The textures are set apart and overall this character looks good. Personality wise, she has believable traits with well rounded talents and flaws. She feels like a well fleshed out and polished OC. Now for things I think you could improve on. There isn't much wrong but one would be the zipper. It doesn't seem to fold with her clothes. I can see that there's a section where the shirt dips but the zipper doesn't. Her hair looks a little flat and her ear is a bit small. Her right arm bends strangely across her chest which could just be a problem with perspective. I suggest using references for this. Her left eye is bit high on her face but it's not that noticeable. Other than that, there isn't much else to point out. Everything looks awesome except for a few things every now and again. Hope this helps!
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adam-ant2 [2018-02-12 01:21:51 +0000 UTC]
From her clothes to her hair you've shaded this picture beautifully.
I also like the sly expression you've given her.
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Mountny In reply to adam-ant2 [2018-02-12 01:23:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
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RedStars7 [2018-02-06 15:36:03 +0000 UTC]
I love her design! She's gorgeous!
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Mountny In reply to RedStars7 [2018-02-07 02:54:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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