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Mr-Culexus — Verloren Hoop 18
Published: 2009-06-25 07:42:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 19306; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 115
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" The ship creaks and moans, its hull punctured and its systems eroded. You see out the window that you have drifted considerably off course and now tumble toward a small island, lush with foliage. The engine finally gives out, and the ship begins to fall"and that, is where we end it for now.
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Poor ship...
Its okay Triella, there was nothing you could do ;_; Was just the poor girl's time.
I say again. Your GM...I should buy that man a drink.
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I currently have to buy him many in place of others. I am fine with adding yours to the list.
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Oh no!
She'll need those bits of engine for flying!
I have enjoyed this thoroughly and look forward to seeing more.
Or should that be 'moar!'
Meh, I don't get this modern talk.
I'll try high gothic.
I beseach you sir, furnish us with an abounding continuation of this serial that our collective voracity for this tale can reach adequate satiety!
Thats better.
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full of....lady orks?
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Hmmmm, maybe it is, maybe it is....
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man never knew so much could happen in just one Valkyrie scene quite nice
you mean end it here as in this is where it all ends and this is the final page or you mean end it here as in more will come though in a much later time
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There is more to come, and its not far off.
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ah for a second there i thought it was all over here ok well that's good it ain't over yet and also i take it that the title "Verloren Hoop" appearing at the final panel means this is just the intro or something
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man wish I had Pen and paper games this good...
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In the next episode of "Survivor Verloren Hoop edition" The Imperium struggle to survived on an uncharted Island while on the other team the Chaos Lord have already..
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and the island jumps in the time?
maybe i've seen this story somewhere else
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hey this sounds like LOST! 40k
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Um, if you don't like it, you don't HAVE to read it, you know?
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I do like it, you moron. It was a response to the news that you weren't doing any more.
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This has been established, thanks for enjoying my work, less so for calling me a moron.
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no we like it too much
we need moar... we need our culexus-fix...
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Oh right. Neat.
Well, I am drawing more.
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Yes, it's exelent. So entertaining to read. Great work.
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Is this going to become heretical Lost or something?
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See that's what I was thinking what with "Verloren" being the germanic for "Lost"
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Powerful unlikely, never seen a single episode of that show.
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its Survivor, The Soap Opera.
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Triella looks like a veterinarian that just lost her pet puppy during surgery.
Of course it's rare for vets to swing their pets around wildly during operations...but there you go.
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Dun Dun Duuuunnnnnn
Nice cliff hanger ending there
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Wait... "Verloren"... oh goddamit!
I see what you did there Culexis... god damn you...
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