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juraj2002 [2021-05-04 05:31:50 +0000 UTC]
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blitzkrieg9892000 [2018-03-25 05:47:09 +0000 UTC]
The story has a solid foundation in what it's trying to portray, i'm curious to see 'more' of the characters as the story goes on. I'm not sure how i feel about the frequency of jumping around to different characters. On the one hand i like seeing the different characters in the story and i see am interested in how the 'wine' effects Sonia and the people she will directly visit in the future. I guess i would like to see a bit more time spent on each 'section'. I also now notice this chapter was posted a year and a 1/2 ago. Is there a chance of this being continued?Β
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MrWhiteShin In reply to blitzkrieg9892000 [2018-04-02 23:00:16 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the input and yeah towards the end it feels forced, chapter length wise, I can see now where I missed opportunities. I do have it on the back burner, I need to play the game again cause I have lost all the knowledge I had about the game. As to when it will continue, I am working on a commission or two so that takes priority but this is definitely a W.I.P.
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theking2281 [2016-10-21 12:48:02 +0000 UTC]
Do you think you will ever do a Fire Emblem fates story once you're done with the Awakening one?
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MrWhiteShin In reply to theking2281 [2016-10-23 02:56:56 +0000 UTC]
I am actually working on one right now to be honest with you
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DOOM-Knight009 [2016-08-22 16:46:11 +0000 UTC]
I like.
I like a lot.
Moar?
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MrWhiteShin In reply to DOOM-Knight009 [2016-08-23 01:40:27 +0000 UTC]
There should be some more stashed away in my cluttered folders, and Thanks for the appreciation.
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