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yogelis [2023-03-16 13:15:43 +0000 UTC]
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rogelis [2018-12-05 00:11:37 +0000 UTC]
this is totally the most incredible phenomenal bizarre crazy and great masterpiece that I've seen!
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Mustache-Twirler In reply to rogelis [2018-12-05 00:16:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! Although I do admit I think I used the spray can effect a bit too much. But yes, I wanted Matthew’s characters teach that horrid Gary-Stu not to mess with Criticism let alone Nitrona’s lover.
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AudeS [2018-11-28 21:58:37 +0000 UTC]
Since I did give you a personal statement before, I think it is time to reactivate my old bones. As your story has become a splendid take on how different types of heroes and villains exist in media, using the metaphysical aspects of storytelling as the metaphysical principles of this reality, the story of an ultimate force of lawful self-righteousness (the law being his own) fighting for the sake of satisfying their own ego is certainly a very interesting inversion of the heroic Gary Stue character becoming so obsessed in the heroic ideal that he does in fact become a villain that justifies himself being a hero on purely biased principles. As a result, the way Starla and Nitrona act here is certainly a great way for facing off against him, as nothing defeats the embodiement of unreasonable ambition and ruthless heroism more than being called out for the own leaps of logic and bad motivations behind one's goals.
It is actually interesting as he was perfectly able to defeat being so powerful that they are able to destroy universes easily, if they so desired. Yet, power alone does not make a good character and the might of a critique is often a death sentence to a badly written character or story. In fact, this being his weakness is perfectly sensible and brilliant as it showcases that not even someone like him is above critique.
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Mustache-Twirler In reply to AudeS [2018-12-11 22:49:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
Well, since Superman keeps being written into a bastardisation of what he is supposed to stand for, how about I make that the big conflict with ANJ. And Nitrona and Starla were both great candidates to be the ones who would combine their forces of both benevolent and malevolent to overcome such a broken tier character. And I agree with you about criticism.
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Silvolf [2018-11-25 12:36:17 +0000 UTC]
These types always hate criticism and the truth!!!
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Cambion-Hunter [2018-11-25 06:23:45 +0000 UTC]
He be like, "LOGIC and CRITICAL FEEDBACK. My two weaknesses!"
It wins out.
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SwordSparks [2018-11-25 04:03:31 +0000 UTC]
Blown out of here, like a cockroach!
See ya, Ass-miral!
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Mustache-Twirler In reply to SwordSparks [2018-11-25 13:49:39 +0000 UTC]
Master Fiendish; “And stay the hell out, Ass-miral! I like that name, a lot easier to say. Thanks!”
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DrMatthew178 [2018-11-25 01:46:55 +0000 UTC]
Wow..AMAZING!
this was awesome!
thank you!
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Mustache-Twirler In reply to DrMatthew178 [2018-11-25 13:44:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
I’m glad you enjoy it, as it took me a while to complete the post and a bit longer for the story, though I’m uncertain as to where to follow up from here since Peccatori’s gone and Nitrona now has his powers.
I thought it would be interesting writing about Nitrona overcoming each of Pec’s three enemies, despite each being worse than the last.
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