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Kitten-Gigglez [2015-06-23 01:18:31 +0000 UTC]
Somebody give this dork some potatoes, dammit >.<
Love that you can clearly see how he's matured, but it still looks like the same person. VERY nice artwork, as usual. I look forward to seeing much more of this dork~
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Kitten-Gigglez In reply to my-sword-is-bigger [2015-06-24 16:04:55 +0000 UTC]
///He is such a little dork///
Have you tried doing base lines~? Like lines to line up everything on the face? I often do this, but I'm not sure if it will work considering your style is a lot more realistic. But worth a try
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my-sword-is-bigger In reply to Kitten-Gigglez [2015-07-02 12:35:59 +0000 UTC]
xD
You mean when you start the face off as a circle with a cross in it, and ratio out the nose and mouth and everything? I get the feeling you mean something else entirely … o_o
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my-sword-is-bigger In reply to Kitten-Gigglez [2015-07-16 22:06:16 +0000 UTC]
Oh right >.>
It doesn't work entirely well with trying to get the jaw right, unfortunately. And sometimes you think something lines up or is symmetrical but it's not It's not.
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Italiawolf [2015-02-06 15:28:03 +0000 UTC]
XD I would shove a box of pototoes to Ruso's chest and be like "HERE'S A BOX OF ODINDAMN POTATOES! TAKE THEM ALL YOU WANT AND DONT TELL MY DADDY WHEN I TOOK THEM AWAY FROM HIM!"
haha XD but yeah I can't stand potatoes because my dad love getting free potatoes in everyfigging day DX I'm sick of eating potatoes and I almost tried to get rid of them by dumping them in trash but my dad will yell at me -_- I told my dad if he's gonna make potatoes again then I would let starve myself to death.
Anyways LONG TIME NO CHAT! :'D I haven't been on very often because of school but I'm not on break yet sadly T-T But dude, I still can imagine that Einar would be great best friend with your Ruso XD Einar would be ego and jerkass too but he loves to have "fun" with women -_- Pervert jerk lol But he is now have new lover who was great warrior woman and this time he loves her than any of slave women he had with. But he would die anyway -_-
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Italiawolf In reply to my-sword-is-bigger [2015-02-09 18:02:53 +0000 UTC]
My dad has best friend who worked with potatoes like farm or factory.
XD I am sure Einar will like to challenge sword fight with him and see how strong he is
An warrior native lady is hot =w= but Einar got trapped by natives and his boat got burnt because of them. Einar couldn't able to escape and being forced to learn natives' language and culture because they wouldn't understand Einar's norse language. You know the movie "Pathfinder?" Just almost like that ;w;
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Scr1b3 [2014-08-22 00:47:17 +0000 UTC]
Like WOW!!! And great dragon too btw, will we be seeing more of it, or is it just a random creature thingy?
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charcoalfeather [2014-08-20 01:19:27 +0000 UTC]
Love the contrast in the background! And the dragon in young Ruso's picture is so adorable, hehe. You always do dragons so nicely.
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Tikoea [2014-08-20 01:08:04 +0000 UTC]
aah that's super cool! I like the colour contrast, not sure if that was intentional but I do love it /w\
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Pebblefur [2014-06-26 08:25:18 +0000 UTC]
I love the contrast between old and young Ruso's expressions and poses >w<
You can really sense the change...
The colours used so far are awesome
looks like it's going to be another great piece!!!
also, things to point out?
Nope, others have already pointed out stuff c:
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my-sword-is-bigger In reply to Pebblefur [2014-07-04 08:14:47 +0000 UTC]
DUDE DUDE DUDE
I JUST SAID DON'T TELL HIM
WHAT ARE YOU DOING
NUUUU
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Pebblefur In reply to my-sword-is-bigger [2014-08-27 04:16:13 +0000 UTC]
(no I did not notice o.o But I see it now XD)
(Oh I see... Ruso's not really gonna be happy about that...)
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Grumpy-Old-Snake [2014-06-25 19:15:08 +0000 UTC]
He really goes for the fur, doesn't he? Makes me smile. Also brazenly grinning little!Ruso is adorable.
In relation to the critique charcoalfeather offered, I'd agree that older Ruso's arm seems a bit long. The hand might also be a touch large, but stylistically I don't think it's too far off mark. I've got girl hands and I can still cover a pretty good portion of my face with them, and larger than normal blunt hands are a pretty common artistic choice for strongly built characters that use their hands a lot.
As far as little Ruso goes, depending on his age I'd say he's proportioned pretty accurately really. (Though we've gone over my inexperience on this topic before, so take my opinion with a grain of salt as always... ) The superfluffy cape makes his shoulders seem bigger than they are, but under all that fluffy blustering clothing is still definitely a kid. The eyes are maybe a touch far apart, but it's not bad.
The only comment I'd really have is that, depending on his age, his jaw seems a bit too strong. His face and its position on his head definitely look young, but the chin is pretty developed. He has a strong face as part of his character, so I wouldn't narrow it or anything, but smoothing the edges of his chin into the rest of his jawline just a bit might make him look more youthful. Again, sort of depends on the age you're going for--pre pubescent, or have his bones begun to develop?
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charcoalfeather [2014-06-25 15:34:40 +0000 UTC]
WOAH! I love the Ruso on the right! His face is seriously excellent there, and he looks so serious and mature. Little Ruso on the left is so adorable and he looks like he's thinking about a trick he's going to play on someone.
Some comments:
-I know you're not done yet, but I think you might want to pay more attention to mature Ruso's proportions. It seems to me that his arms are too long compared to his legs and that his hands, especially the one at his waist, might be too thick and large. If you stretched out his hand, it seems like it's larger than his face.
-I also think his feet are too large (for the Ruso on the right).
-For little Ruso, I think his arm seems too thick? There's something about his arm that doesn't seem quite right, especially when compared to his face.
-How old is little Ruso, there? Perhaps around 12?
-I think his eyes are a little too far apart (young Ruso) and his forehead seems too small. I think perhaps he would also look more proportionate if his head was a bit larger (since he's a kid)?
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my-sword-is-bigger In reply to charcoalfeather [2014-06-26 05:33:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I'm really proud of the one on the left, I've never drawn him properly that old before. And yeah, young Ruso was never a helpful kid. Don't think 'mature' Ruso exists, though! Bigger, maybe XD
I really appreciate the feedback! In fact, I appreciate it more on incomplete pictures because then I'm at a position to fix it before I mess up too much.
I fixed up the arms and, and downsized the hand a bit (although not much, since I think they look about right). I also downsized the boot. What do you think? Disproportionate, fine, or too small?
Young Ruso's arm doesn't seem to sit naturally with the rest of the picture, I'm not sure why but I suspect it might be because it doesn't interact with the fur well enough. It's definitely not too thick though (he's got armour on, and besides, he's a brat but not a scrawny brat! )
Argh you're forcing me to put a number to his age >.< (I never count. Because his culture doesn't count.) Estimation … 14? Don't take that as canon. It's a guess. Old enough to not be too squished in a battle.
(eesh even larger? I think his head's big enough ) No but seriously lol. Also, don't forget that his bearskin actually makes him look about ⅓ bigger than he actually is. I tried fixing up the eyes, they still don't look perfect so I might tamper with them a bit more.
Thanks for the bullet points!!
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charcoalfeather In reply to my-sword-is-bigger [2014-06-26 22:11:01 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, true about that. "Bigger" Ruso should work.
I saw how you changed things a bit now! Yep, I think the proportions are a lot better now. Yeah, now that I think about it, young Ruso's arm isn't that thin; it's just the armour. I think what's "weird" about his arm is that yeah, as you pointed out, the fur doesn't look like it's being affected by the arm underneath it. For his arm to be in that position, his shoulder and the upper part of his arm would have to bend out a bit, so the fur would be affected.
Ah, okay, about his age. That makes sense. Has he gone through puberty yet, though? From what I've seen in the picture, it appears that he's still pre-pubescent (whatever his numerical age is), so I think his face can also be a bit rounder/not as square. His jaw seems a bit on the big side for a pre-pubescent kid, but perhaps, that's just me.
No problem!
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charcoalfeather In reply to my-sword-is-bigger [2014-07-01 22:17:49 +0000 UTC]
Ahaha, okay. Oh, I just thought he might be pre-pubescent because of his height. I think most growth spurts happen just before the voice breaks, so I thought he'd be at least shoulder height with the older Ruso if his voice had already broken. I'm probably just nitpicking though xD
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my-sword-is-bigger In reply to charcoalfeather [2014-07-04 00:32:56 +0000 UTC]
lol I didn't know that actually XD Thanks for the heads up, I might make him a bit taller in that case. once again, never paid attention in class.
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charcoalfeather In reply to my-sword-is-bigger [2014-07-04 00:37:00 +0000 UTC]
Haha, no problem. It's entirely your choice if you want to change it or not.
I didn't pay attention in class either (I don't think we learned about that stuff, though. It was just "Don't do drugs!" over and over again and graphic pictures of STDs)--I was mostly recalling from personal experience with friends and people I saw/have seen throughout middle and high school. I was particularly reminded of someone I knew whose voice only started breaking when he was 17 or so, in grade 11. He had a huge growth spurt in the summer and when we saw him again in grade 12, he was a lot taller and his voice had broken. Similar things had happened a few years back for the other boys, too, so yeah, personal experience.
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my-sword-is-bigger In reply to charcoalfeather [2014-08-03 00:41:23 +0000 UTC]
lol for us it was all about feelly feellies and periods making you pissed off at everything. (I went to a girls school during that time, only came back to a boy-girl one after the voice-breaking age of around 14 I think.)
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charcoalfeather In reply to my-sword-is-bigger [2014-08-03 00:43:32 +0000 UTC]
Ah, okay.
That doesn't sound like a fun health class at all. No wonder you didn't pay attention. xD
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