Comments: 22
RiseandBe [2011-02-17 03:18:49 +0000 UTC]
I like this very much.
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GuyoftheWeek [2011-02-17 00:07:58 +0000 UTC]
Wow, very strong.
Well done.
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djibouti4 [2011-02-16 23:59:53 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful work. At first I thought "great, another 'you are so beautiful, to me'" poem, but the twist really lifted this piece. And I also thought it was more realistic that they never meet. So overall, an organically tragic poem.
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MyLastBlkRose In reply to djibouti4 [2011-02-17 04:08:25 +0000 UTC]
Well thank you so kindly darling.
I cant foresee them meeting to be honest.
Well I can, but it wouldn't be pretty xD
My girlfriend thinks I should start it into a novel,
I just don't know.
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MyLastBlkRose In reply to djibouti4 [2011-02-17 18:37:06 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I take that all into consideration.
I feel like there would be a horrendously strong connection.
However, I think the relationship would be unhealthy, and completely uneven.
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lolatheloner [2011-02-16 23:11:33 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful... Provokes so many emotions, and yet I'm somewhat at a loss for words.
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MyLastBlkRose In reply to lolatheloner [2011-02-16 23:53:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you darling, I'm glad you liked it.
Means so much<3
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Tsukino-Miyako [2011-02-16 23:02:26 +0000 UTC]
Wow. All I can say is wow. This is absoluty amazing.
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Carpe-Diem-Et-Noctem [2011-02-16 22:35:45 +0000 UTC]
mesmerizing. I could see it play by in my head while reading it. Bravo.
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