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Published: 2003-08-30 03:39:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 4068; Favourites: 86; Downloads: 30
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Description Falling

I am falling
Into the endless night
Of darkness.
Things rush by me as I fall,
A wilted flower,
A ruined child’s toy,
Still I fall forever

I am falling,
Not knowing where;
Or when;
Or why.
All I know is the darkness,
And the shadows.
Still I fall forever.

I am falling,
I open my hand,
Eyes straining in the black light,
My palm is streaked with blood.
I recoil, clench my fist hard,
With blood soaked fingers.
And still I fall forever.

I am falling,
My soul – like a caged bird,
But no bars to hold me,
No locks to keep me.
I must endure the pain,
Of eternal captivity.
And still, I fall forever..

Dying Soul

As I crouch here on the floor,
Tears streak my face as I cry,
I feel like I’ve been here before,
My heart is shattered, soon to die.

In the darkened room I shy,
Away from shadows on the wall,
Any word I speak becomes a lie,
Lies that pierce my very soul.

I whirl around to see myself,
Staring with huge and frightened eyes,
The wide-eyed girl, the frightened whelp,
The one who’s soon to break and die.

I cry out from the pain,
The pain from deep within my soul,
That I cannot seem to reign,
Soon it will take its toll.

My soul is torn and broken,
This I know as on the floor I lie,
That the Dark Lord now has spoken,
He has come for when I die.
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Comments: 13

PrincessJennavive [2015-09-29 16:34:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow.... just wow..... please never stop writing

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angelofdarkneess [2013-02-09 00:36:43 +0000 UTC]

i like both of them, they are deep.

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Midnight-Streak [2011-06-04 21:58:33 +0000 UTC]

like the theme (falling)

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FlAcAsIsTeR [2009-09-12 00:43:53 +0000 UTC]

dont worry bout the underlined, wat matters r the words, which is a rly good poem i rly like it... its so depressing.. they kinda say too much bout me... my fav is falling, by the way. great job!

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shallow-GuRl [2009-04-04 12:30:55 +0000 UTC]

thats really nice,i like it =]..

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xmonkeygalx [2009-01-07 19:37:24 +0000 UTC]

i like t he second one most!!!!

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Kerrybearisme [2008-12-09 22:26:39 +0000 UTC]

I like Drying Soul the most.
+Favv.

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soul-rose [2008-07-03 06:28:11 +0000 UTC]

O.O That is amazing. I just... feel like these two poems say so much... I can't discribe it. It's not just depression... but it's also a feeling of understanding. Everyone is depressed. Everyone gets depressed. These two poems say so much about everything in life. You did an awesome job. I love it.

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evillittledevil [2008-03-12 22:19:33 +0000 UTC]

depressing i like that

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shallowpelt [2007-11-17 07:51:27 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful....I love both, but I love the dying soul one the best because it seems to reach out to me...though both were still magnificant!

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RebelRockerGirl [2007-08-28 12:37:50 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!! Well done!!! I like both of 'em!!! Expecially Dying Soul!!! They're REALLY expressive!!!

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dragons-spirit [2005-11-27 01:20:04 +0000 UTC]

very good alot of thought went ito this i can see dont worry about it being underlined doesnt matter a fav for sure
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emelia

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myrina [2003-08-30 03:40:21 +0000 UTC]

oops sry i didnt mean it all to be underlined ;;-_-

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