Comments: 24
KaraTails [2012-12-22 06:09:58 +0000 UTC]
Looks good, but I wul try using blues and purples on the shadows instead of shifting tp a darker color.
warm colored highlight, and cyanes for the blue neck, could help improve things
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Mythee In reply to KaraTails [2012-12-22 16:58:52 +0000 UTC]
You may be right! I often fiddle with shading hues but end up settling for more subdued ones because I'm afraid of going overboard. Should probably ask other people to decide for me what is a good amount xD
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SilverFlight [2012-11-12 15:21:48 +0000 UTC]
Oh! So shiny!
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Book-Rat [2012-11-10 17:49:21 +0000 UTC]
Those coverlets are beautiful. *___* The way the tips are gold on the end instead of outlined dark really makes them pop.
Since critique is requested, one thing that sticks out to me is that the primary feathers are divided down the middle. Flight feathers are thinner and stiffer on one side compared to the other, and when that isn't shown the effect is that most people can tell something is a little off, though not necessarily pinpoint what.
The shading is excellent too.
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Mythee In reply to Book-Rat [2012-11-13 14:29:58 +0000 UTC]
Amg you're right. xD I was wondering what was bothering me about the primaries QvQ;; Mebbe I could even fix it some time. Thank you so much! And I'm glad you like the coverlets, they are more the result of being lazy with lineart than purposeful choice though, lol.
Bassy I miss you. :C Man. Did you ever see the Flash animation that we had -almost-finished for your birthday? xDD (Also, I gotta get caught up reading your story >O Which I... forgot to critique in the margins... but I'll get back to doing that eventually 8'D;; )
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Mythee In reply to Book-Rat [2012-11-21 18:41:26 +0000 UTC]
It never got boring! I got carried away reading it and stopped critiquing despite my promise to critique every chapter, and then decided not to continue reading it until I went back and critiqued the chapters I hadn't critiqued yet, and it's been stalled there. xD That's awesome that it's finished though! OuO
And yeah, most brush-shaded arts would probably be prettier without lineart if done right, but I simply don't have the time for that. xD;
I'll see if I can finish the animation despite everything during the winter break. Remind me of it please? XDD
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Book-Rat In reply to Mythee [2012-11-27 15:40:54 +0000 UTC]
Aww. <3 YOU DON'T HAVE TO PUT YOURSELF THROUGH THAT IF YOU DON'T FEEL LIKE IT THOUGH. D:; That seems like a whole lot of work for such a detailed critique! (appreciated, granted, but a lot of work!)
That seems to be the main problem with art, time rather than skill level. =w=;
I don't know where it is and can't find it!? D: *wants to see unfinished animation*
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Mythee In reply to Book-Rat [2012-12-18 05:01:40 +0000 UTC]
Unfinished animation is here xD [link]
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Book-Rat In reply to Mythee [2012-12-19 01:03:17 +0000 UTC]
O___________O
Oh my, that was the most beautiful thing I have ever seen. 8'D *flails about uselessly in wordless adoration for like ten minutes before giving up and posting this*
I love you guys. <3
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Mythee In reply to Book-Rat [2012-12-19 19:45:34 +0000 UTC]
WE LOVE YOU TOO >O It was iP and Mewrose that also participated, methinks! It's not finished though, there was one scene after that where iP was supposed to find you. xD
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Book-Rat In reply to Mythee [2012-12-24 18:23:17 +0000 UTC]
IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL. xD;;
I thought the world kinda got blown up at the end. :>
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Mythee In reply to Book-Rat [2012-12-25 20:34:50 +0000 UTC]
You're on the moon. 8'D
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f-cat [2012-11-03 12:15:42 +0000 UTC]
awesome ! ^^
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Mythee In reply to f-cat [2012-11-03 16:59:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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f-cat In reply to Mythee [2012-12-15 13:43:08 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome !
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Nyx--Nyx [2012-10-29 22:52:35 +0000 UTC]
SWEET JEEZZUZ.
This is fucking gorgeous omg. LET ME SMOOCH YOUR TALLENTED FACE *GRABBY HANDS*
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Mythee In reply to Nyx--Nyx [2012-10-30 00:35:36 +0000 UTC]
AND NOW MY FACE IS TOUCHING YOUR TALENTED HANDS. THE CIRCLE IS COMPLETE
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Linearis [2012-10-29 12:27:09 +0000 UTC]
Wow... how do you color so well? QQ Looks amazing.
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Mythee In reply to Linearis [2012-10-29 13:54:31 +0000 UTC]
Brushes with pen-pressure sensitive opacity are your friend!
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WindyPower [2012-10-29 03:53:17 +0000 UTC]
I like sssssssnakesssssss and sssserpentsssssss
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Mythee In reply to WindyPower [2012-10-29 05:54:43 +0000 UTC]
sssssssso do I
It'ssssssss late
Ssssssweet dreamssssss Wind
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bricu [2012-10-29 01:32:01 +0000 UTC]
omg, this is so detailed and pleasing to the eye. I especially love the wings and the shading on them. *___*
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Mythee In reply to bricu [2012-10-29 01:45:51 +0000 UTC]
AMG BRICU IT'S BEEN FOREVER~ Thank you! n-n Glad you like it.
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