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Published: 2010-10-20 19:48:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1961; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 14
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Ah Zuko is being mean
However Katara can only hold her tounge for so long Zuzu, she might kill you if you continue to be so insensitive XDanyways hope you like ^^
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the "your" in the ninth panel should be "you're".
other than that I'm glad you has started updating again...
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Ah yeah Im not good at spelling XD Thank you for telling me ^^ x
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oh lawd. every time katara meets a guy she always has to mention her mother. no offense. i mean she did that with every one!
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haha dont worry, thats not coming yet, it'll be later. I see what u mean tho, she did said it with haru and jet, and zuko in the caves XD
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i laughed when she did it in the caves cuz she was telling him off!but then that was when my love for zutara formed so woo!
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haha mine was formed when she was yelling at him after he joined the group, Ive no idea why. Ah well theres a fine line between love and hate XD
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Absolutly exceptional work, TT. The plot is really coming along, and as always the character portrayal is near-perfect. The illistrations are continuing to be marvellous, and so full of emotion, just fabulous.
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Naawww thank you, you always say the nicest things ^^ xxx
I dunno if I can meet up because I have college work to do, but I'll let you know xxxx
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AH, k, fair enough. I should be working as well, but right this second i just really don't want to.
(And I say then because their true
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Yay!! Theres the memories coming up now right?! and stories about their past
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perhaps a bit soon for that since Zuko isnt very approachable right now. But I promise there will be later after an... incident. 
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Awesome!!!! Incident??!! You sure know how to bring on the tension
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Yeah hes being all mean and stuff. lol Great page!
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very interesting story, I just found it and read all 13 pages and I cant wait for more
but just a suggestion, it would be helpful to new readers like me if you went back and added navigation links so we can smoothly go back and forth between pages.
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Thanks for the comment, Im glad you like it so far x
Yeah I've been meaning to do that for awhile but I always get distracted XD I'll do it now, thanks for reminding me xxx
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More tension between the would be lovers, can wait to see where this goes XD
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hehe you got a whole lot more tension coming after this, but at least it comes with bonding aswell XD
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the more they fight, the more you know they love each other ^.^
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hehehe, you know if they argue, it only means they are passionate about one another XD
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dun dun! Memories on the last panel and cool evil eye thing for Zuko and Katara, gosh Zuko is such a jerk sometimes but in a hot way. Good job
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hahaha very true. Im glad u liked the glare thing, made me giggle while drawing it hehe x
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ur welcome i can't wait for the next page
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yesh I will have it up asap ^^ I have a week off college now so I will have plenty of time xx
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^^ sweetness i bet the comic will get epic
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i know it will cause it has Zutara ^^
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hahaha so even if I royally mess this story up, it'll be ok cos it has the best pairing in the world in it? XD
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depends what made u screw the comic up and yesh ^^
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true, true, but with reviewers like you, you can tell me whenever you think its screwing up, and I can fix it before its royally screwed up for good ^^
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kk keep up the good work though ^^
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