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NachosNcheese — Thanks, Jak.

Published: 2010-02-24 17:23:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 5350; Favourites: 144; Downloads: 41
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Description was calling for V-day submissions, so I decided to throw in my two cents.

I meant for this to be Keira finally getting around to thanking Jak for bringing her the last of those power cells she needed for the zoomer. And catching him a bit by surprise.

Jak and Keira are the only 'couple' I can really get behind. If Jak was to be with anyone that is. Precursor Legacy versions, because that was my favorite of the games (and when this pairing had the most potential. Even if Keira would have had to make the first move).

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Comments: 19

SERPENT34431 [2011-12-14 00:14:03 +0000 UTC]

Finaly!

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NachosNcheese In reply to SERPENT34431 [2011-12-25 19:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Haha, right?

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dannybird22 [2010-09-07 05:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh I how I wished she would just kiss him like this in the game. I mean their whole "teens realizing their feelings" thing they had going on was so adorable. I have noticed though that Keira can be a bit of a shameless flirt when it comes to Jak.
I love the soft, brown tone you gave the drawing. And their expressions take the cake. Especially Jak's. XD
I am definitely faving this.

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NachosNcheese In reply to dannybird22 [2010-09-10 00:12:36 +0000 UTC]

I know right? The one thing that was left hanging, and sadly unconcluded. Their first game cuteness was my favorite Jak/Keira interaction.
And yes, Keira is quite aggressive, but she had no one to practice on before Jak right? (Though it's not like she had any competition...)

Thanks so much for the lovely comment and fave

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dannybird22 In reply to NachosNcheese [2010-09-11 19:51:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know. I mean there's like no other cute guys in the village (though the sculptor seems sweet, but he doesn't fit her heroic type, and Daxter... no way she's dating animals). And Keira is the only female there other than the bird lady. Yeah she definitely doesn't have competition. XP

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Wastelanders-Haven [2010-05-21 19:16:37 +0000 UTC]

hahaha this is really good! I love the little 'precursor-esque' heart above their heads and that Jak looks wicked surprized. I always liked the JakXKeira relationship best, too (My friend loves JakXAshlin which, to be honest, I could never really get behind...). I actually found my way here after reading your 'Martyrs accepted, Not Desired' fanfic (I was the one who left the sort of obnoxiously long review on it under 'Stranger'...heh... ) .
Good work!

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WILL SOMEBODY GET THIS KID A HAPPYMEAL?!

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NachosNcheese In reply to Wastelanders-Haven [2010-05-23 21:26:23 +0000 UTC]

You!
I'm going to tell you now that obnoxiously long reviews are a writer's dream. So don't apologize, I really love hearing what people have to say beyond "Great work," and "Update soon!"

I'm really flattered you followed me here (I've done the same for a lot of authors I like) and that you took the time to look around. And also that you're a JxK supporter.

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Wastelanders-Haven In reply to NachosNcheese [2010-06-06 22:23:39 +0000 UTC]

hahaha! Well I'm glad then! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff in the future. Definately keep going with the fanfictions, you have a real knack for it!

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Sounds like a real 'cheery' place!

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parasiticflower [2010-03-16 11:53:12 +0000 UTC]

They both look so sweet. Great work. :>

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NachosNcheese In reply to parasiticflower [2010-03-18 02:12:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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jinx-lin [2010-02-24 22:11:20 +0000 UTC]

That's one way to thank him, though I'm sure he probably doesn't mind.
They were so happy and carefree in the Precursor Legacy! Now look at them...
It looks really good.

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NachosNcheese In reply to jinx-lin [2010-02-25 01:05:58 +0000 UTC]

Agh, thanks so much
I agree, they kind of let their relationship fall into oblivion, then tried to revitalize it in Jak X. It just felt really weak to me, and I like seeing them this way.

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jinx-lin In reply to NachosNcheese [2010-02-25 01:23:49 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!
TPL was innocent -and really colorful!- and happy, so they really should at least have gotten some headway in their relationship there. Jak 3 and somewhat Jak 2 were understandable and all, but still.
Jak X was kinda weak there -Jak just kind of stood there awkwardly while Keira hit on him. me thinks he was sort of oblivious though xD

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NachosNcheese In reply to jinx-lin [2010-02-25 01:57:35 +0000 UTC]

I guess that will forever be the essence of their relationship; Keira randomly gets struck by romantic thoughts for Jak, who's in a constant state of.. unawareness. lol Gotta love it.

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jinx-lin In reply to NachosNcheese [2010-02-25 21:25:21 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, yes!
I loved how in Jak X she was obviously hitting on him, and he's either 'What?' or simply stands there grinning almost awkwardly. 'Least they finally kissed though.

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TolekBanan2007 [2010-02-24 20:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice shading

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NachosNcheese In reply to TolekBanan2007 [2010-02-24 20:40:33 +0000 UTC]

I tried Thanks for faving!

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Shanks-kun [2010-02-24 18:14:58 +0000 UTC]

Callie, I'm sitting here in Myths and Legends... Where are you?
Nice picture by the way

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NachosNcheese In reply to Shanks-kun [2010-02-24 20:28:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm home... Sorry to leave you alone. I just decided to be a hero today.

Accidentally fell asleep early last night (Olympic Narcolepsy is no joke!) and didn't get any studying in for my Euro test.. Because no one thought to wake me up *sigh*

I hope it isn't processing day in photo. What'll I do without you?

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