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ptrgags [2017-12-03 20:34:15 +0000 UTC]
I really like this animation, it flows smoothly. The animated eyes in her hair are a neat, creepy touch!
I think the hand motion is fine since they only move briefly. However, I think the white outlines around her arms could use a bit less anti-aliasing. This would help make a cleaner transition between the white outlines and the black outline.
I have one suggestion about the character’s real eyes. Try using slightly thinner lines and/or make the lines a bit sharper. This would help make the lines crisp like those elsewhere in the animation.
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nahomira In reply to ptrgags [2017-12-03 21:01:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your comment! About anti-aliasing, do you mean the arms that come out of skirt or her true ones? I think I could use sharp filtr for them, maybe this would help. I'll also thinner lines of her eyes if you say so, we will see how it will look, my brother always tells me that I draw too wide outlines, too
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ptrgags In reply to nahomira [2017-12-03 21:21:42 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
Her true arms. So many extra body parts on this character XD
Yeah try that and see how it looks. I think it's the fact that the white lines are next to black lines that makes this drawing a bit tricky.
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Rolut [2017-12-01 21:40:58 +0000 UTC]
This is a moment in which I'm jealous that I can't make animations
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nahomira In reply to Rolut [2017-12-02 08:51:12 +0000 UTC]
My animation level isn't high, you could definitely make something like this!
This video is helpful, if you didn't see it yet then you should ---> youtu.be/uDqjIdI4bF4
And about programme, I use PS but many people say it's not the best for animation. One of deviantartist recommended my OpenToonz, it's free and I'm going to try it, you could try it too, I hope there are tutorials on YT about it
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GazeRei [2017-12-01 09:49:32 +0000 UTC]
WOAAAAH OH MY GOD--- WHERE TO EVEN START
HOLY CATS--
I jsut omfg, I'm so speechless---
I knew your animation would be hella good, but this is just way over all my expectations ;___;
I already loved the just blinking/moving eyes version so far, but this complete version just totally blew my mind!
The animation looks really smooth and I really love how you shift between close-up and fullbody, it's very fluid!
I absolutely love how the eyes are moving around then stops for a moment once the eyes on her blindfold opens, then shifting down, knowing the hands are going out - WHICH LOOK REALLY COOL AS WELL OMFG, I LOVE HOW THEY MOVE AROUND!
The motion blur worked out perfectly, and I also lovely the messy background that makes it all amazing!! And lastly, the little smile at the end just puts the dot on the i, it's a perfect "ending" for the animation! Love the soft outline around the hands a lot!
Just woah, you should sell animations like these, you would earn a lot of money with it, seriously!!
Thank you so so much for this, I'm feeling absolutely honored ;____; Thank you, I love it with all my heart!!
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nahomira In reply to GazeRei [2017-12-01 13:17:43 +0000 UTC]
Waaa, I think I'm melting, thank you so much for your kind words, it means a lot to me! <3 <3 <3
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k0guma [2017-12-01 00:10:26 +0000 UTC]
this reminds me of certain manga for adults... but we don talk about that ¬7¬ Anyway, good job!
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GazeRei In reply to k0guma [2017-12-02 00:39:57 +0000 UTC]
*peeks in* What manga is that? :3c I'm curious xD
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k0guma In reply to GazeRei [2017-12-02 07:26:26 +0000 UTC]
The manga is called Ghost Talker's Daydream ... but I wouldn't recommend you to check it out if you are under 18..
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GazeRei In reply to k0guma [2017-12-02 11:49:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! c:
Oh no worries, I'm over 18, and also been reading/watching horror stuffs ever since I'm a teen!
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k0guma In reply to GazeRei [2017-12-02 15:32:47 +0000 UTC]
Yeah but I mean maybe this is not the stuff you might consider .... how do I say it? "readeable for those with a weak stomach" I just read the first one totally fooled by the cover and the translation of the first volume, just the record.
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nahomira In reply to k0guma [2017-12-01 06:35:03 +0000 UTC]
Four hands under skirt, no doubt that that reminds of something x'D Thanks~~!
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InKittyPop [2017-11-30 22:32:23 +0000 UTC]
That was so fantastic! I don't even know where to start! The animation is so smooth and so pleasing to watch!
I liked how the eyes moved down when she lifted her dress, brilliant.
I also liked that she smiled at the end (ʘ‿ʘ) made it more spooky
Such mind blowing, such very good
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nahomira In reply to InKittyPop [2017-12-01 06:32:37 +0000 UTC]
You noticed her smile, yayayay! Eyes are my favourite too, thank you <3
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InKittyPop In reply to nahomira [2017-12-01 13:22:03 +0000 UTC]
Of course <3 Great job
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PowerOfSin [2017-11-30 20:22:17 +0000 UTC]
This is so stylish and smooth, I can't even.
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nahomira In reply to PowerOfSin [2017-12-01 06:30:57 +0000 UTC]
I usually have a delay between frames but here it wasn't any. But animation is faster that way, I don't know if it's good. But thanks! C:
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StoryBirdArtist [2017-11-30 19:33:07 +0000 UTC]
aaaa so scary ;_; great job, you definitely spooked meee
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