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Published: 2009-03-13 12:29:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Soft, misting rain swirling
down from
light gray skies
implies
the
soft scent of Heaven and
supplies the backdrop to our
scene of enchantment.
The beguiling cravings are burning
as the
sun, through the clouds, is yearning to
break...
free...

Your essence sustains me
and I'm
imploring the blaze
and
adoring your gaze.
I am
immobilized
by the truth that's
in your eyes;
how you
speak with no words,
yet your
message pristinely heard
like soft chimes,
captured,
then internalized and
longingly harboured
in this
most sacred arbour
leaving this
incapacitating thirst for
the treasures of
unrequited love.
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Comments: 9

warzonestoic [2009-11-24 09:00:05 +0000 UTC]

You express your love
so passionately, Ashley.

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NaiveMaturity In reply to warzonestoic [2009-11-24 14:37:14 +0000 UTC]

I have always been a
passionate person. My
struggle lies in detachment
when passion has driven
my life for so long.

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priestofknowledge [2009-11-10 17:15:06 +0000 UTC]

This was a wonderful read.

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NaiveMaturity In reply to priestofknowledge [2009-11-13 13:52:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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GrimmReality [2009-05-15 22:49:34 +0000 UTC]

Your poems always make me feel the love i wish i had. I feel like love is not unattainable. much love snuffy

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NaiveMaturity In reply to GrimmReality [2009-05-15 23:00:02 +0000 UTC]

awww..thanks papa bear

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GrimmReality In reply to NaiveMaturity [2009-05-17 02:42:45 +0000 UTC]

not a thing

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Tharlam [2009-04-26 08:05:55 +0000 UTC]

For sure a 'something more' poem of the highest order.

We tread beyond earthly love to an enlightened love breaking through, as sun would through cloud.

Brilliant!

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NaiveMaturity In reply to Tharlam [2009-04-26 14:18:15 +0000 UTC]

My deepest thanks for your most kind words.

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