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Published: 2010-06-12 05:23:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 252; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description It's been a whole life since I've
Seen you last
Wish I could hold you I'm
Losing track

Of all of the days that roll
Slowly by
When I'm without you not
By your side

Oh please come and take me away
As I sit here
I don't want to stay

Oh please bring me your smile
Cause if you were here
I might stay for a while

But you're not
I need you

Like you so much that it's
Hurting me
Making me lonely it's
Hard to see

Those all around me they
Do not get
How love is formed through the
Internet

Oh please come and take me away
As I sit here
I don't want to stay

Oh please bring me your smile
Cause if you were here
I might stay for a while

But you're not
I need you

It's times like this that I
Can't believe
That this is really
Happening

The things that you type out the
Stuff you say
It just constantly

Blows me away

Oh please come and take me away
As I sit here
I don't want to stay

Oh please bring me your smile
Cause if you were here
I might stay for a while

But you're not
I need you
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Comments: 18

Link7788 [2010-11-12 08:14:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is very nice! Did you write the chords as well?

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nalaty19 In reply to Link7788 [2010-11-13 03:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Yep! This song is the only one I've completely finished xD But I have to admit, the chords are terrible...it just sounds kind of childish. But it's not completely terrible

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Link7788 In reply to nalaty19 [2010-11-13 03:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Awe.. The lyrics sound really REALLY nice, though!

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nalaty19 In reply to Link7788 [2010-11-13 03:32:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Maybe one day I'll work on not sucking at writing chords It's just hard cause piano chords are hard to just pull out of nowhere.

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Link7788 In reply to nalaty19 [2010-11-13 06:19:07 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, that they are! Do you take lessons?

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nalaty19 In reply to Link7788 [2010-11-14 03:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeppers. I've taken them for like 5 years xD But yet I still suck really bad

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Link7788 In reply to nalaty19 [2010-11-14 04:06:48 +0000 UTC]

I bet you that you DON'T suck! I used to take piano lessons a long time ago XD

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nalaty19 In reply to Link7788 [2010-11-14 04:08:07 +0000 UTC]

no I actually do xD I'm waaaay behind everyone else my age and I don't practice nearly enough sooo xD

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Link7788 In reply to nalaty19 [2010-11-14 04:18:01 +0000 UTC]

Awe.. :C Do you enjoy playing the piano?

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nalaty19 In reply to Link7788 [2010-11-14 04:51:22 +0000 UTC]

Nope But I do it cause if I want to be a musician then it'll be useful in the future.

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Link7788 In reply to nalaty19 [2010-11-14 04:52:57 +0000 UTC]

XD Nice

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nalaty19 In reply to Link7788 [2010-11-14 05:24:31 +0000 UTC]

yeah xD

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InkQuills [2010-06-13 21:38:22 +0000 UTC]

As I read this I felt as if I was invading something personal...

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nalaty19 In reply to InkQuills [2010-06-13 21:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Well this song is very personal so it would make sense.
Kinda one of those secrets it took me like, forever to work up to courage to tell people and when I did I only told two people. >_>

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InkQuills In reply to nalaty19 [2010-06-13 22:01:30 +0000 UTC]

I see, I see. It's very nice by the way.

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nalaty19 In reply to InkQuills [2010-06-13 22:03:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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GentleOceanMichuru [2010-06-12 21:39:51 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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nalaty19 In reply to GentleOceanMichuru [2010-06-13 01:33:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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